The Girls Meet Keeper and Princess Shayla
It was a sunny day when Sunset Shimmer left Canterlot High and was on her way back to her apartment when she saw a flash of light in the sky heading toward the Everfree Forest, so she raced toward the forest while calling the others, she first called Twilight Sparkle then Applejack then Fluttershy then Rarity then Rainbow Dash then finally Pinkie Pie, Rainbow said that she would be right there then activated her geode for super speed and ran over to where Sunset said she was "What's Up Sunset?" asked Rainbow, "I just saw a flash of light come out of the sky and crash in the forest, I think it was a meteor or falling star, I don't know, it happened so fast" said Sunset, then Twilight showed up and said "Where is the crater? Take me to the crater"
"it is this way, Twi" said Rainbow,
Rainbow, Sunset, and Twilight ran toward the Everfree Forest to where the meteor landed. When they got to the crater they saw a bright light with several different colors of Red, Blue, Yellow, Gold, Silver, Black, Pink, White, Purple, and Green in the shape of spheres with animals inside, the Red, White, and Blue spheres started to glow and shined onto the girls, Sunset picked up the red sphere and said 'Look inside girls, there is something inside the spheres, what do you think they are Twilight?". Twilight picked up the White sphere and looked, "This one has a Tiger inside and yours has a wolf, Sunset, but I am not sure about the blue one, we need to take them all to Fluttershy's, she knows more about animals then I do."
So Sunset, Rainbow, and Twilight ran to Fluttershy's cottage and knocked on her door, her pet rabbit Angel Bunny answered the door, "Hi Angel, is Fluttershy home?' asked Sunset, Angel nodded and beckoned with a paw to follow him so he lead them to where Fluttershy was outside tending to her garden and he hopped over to Fluttershy and tapped on her shoulder, she looked up and saw the others, "Oh Hello Girls, What can I do for you?" asked Fluttershy "Flutters we need you help in identifying some animals that is in these spheres, we were able to identify two of the animals which were in the red and white spheres but since you are the animal expert we came to you for the other spheres" said Twilight.
So Fluttershy picked up the blue sphere and looked at it closely and saw a bird inside and said "This one is a Peregrine Falcon, the Yellow one is a Jackrabbit, the Black one is a Otter, the Green one is a Buffalo, the Pink one is a Kangaroo,
the Purple one is a Fox, the Silver one is a Harpy Eagle, and the Gold one is a Elephant, What did you guys come up for the Red and White ones, Twilight?" asked Fluttershy
"The Red is a Wolf and the White is a white Bengal Tiger" said Twilight, "When we got to where they were in the meteor, three started to glow" said Sunset, "Which ones glowed? asked Fluttershy, "the Red, Blue, and White ones." said Sunset,
Just then the Yellow Sphere started to glow and the light from the glow shined onto Fluttershy. "What is happening to you, Fluttershy, why are you glowing?" said Rainbow, "I don't know but I think these animals are our spirit animals but for what I do not know." said Fluttershy.
"What about the other spheres, why are they not glowing?" asked Sunset,
"Maybe we need the other girls here to help us find out to get the other spheres to glow," Just then Rainbow's phone rang, "Hello? Oh hey Pinkie, yeah, me, Sunset and Twilight are over at Fluttershy's place, are Rarity and Applejack with you?, Yeah, come over to Fluttershy's and bring the others" she hung up and said "That was Pinkie, she is on her way with Rarity, Applejack and the CMC's, Sweetie Belle was having a sleepover with Scootaloo and Apple Bloom at Carousel Boutique so Rarity is bringing Sweetie, Apple Bloom and Scootaloo over with her."
Twilight Sparkle then said "Wait, maybe when Pinkie, Rarity, Applejack, and the CMC's get here, the other spheres will start glowing like the red, blue, white, and yellow ones did for us."
So after a few minutes there was a knock on the door, Fluttershy went to answer it and said "Oh Hi Sweetie Belle, is Rarity with you?"
"She is right behind me, Fluttershy, along with Scootaloo, Applejack, Pinkie Pie and Apple Bloom" said Sweetie Belle, after everyone walked into Fluttershy's place Pinkie asked
"So what was the thing you called us about, Sunset?"
"It was this canister that crashed in the Everfree Forest that had these spheres with animals inside it" said Sunset,
Just then the Pink, Black, Green, Gold, Silver and Purple spheres started to glow and shine onto Scootaloo, Pinkie, Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom, Applejack, and Rarity, The Pink light glowed on Pinkie, the Green light glowed on Applejack, the Black light glowed on Rarity the Gold light glowed on Apple Bloom, the Silver light glowed on Scootaloo and the Purple light glowed on Sweetie Belle, "What is happening, Rarity?!, why am I glowing?", squeaked Sweetie Belle,
"Twilight, your hypothesis was right, the other spheres started to glow when the other girls came over" said Fluttershy,
"What in tarnation is going with us Sunset?" shouted Applejack.
Just then a bright white light came out of the canister and a figure came out of it wearing a long white flowing dress and had long black hair with a flower crown on top of her head, Fluttershy and Sweetie Belle squeaked in fright, and Rainbow and Scootaloo got into fighting stances, "You do not need to fear me, I mean no harm to you, My name is Princess Shayla and I am the guardian of the spheres that has the spirits of the animals that are in these spheres, the animal spirits has chosen you to help defend the Earth from the forces of evil, the galactic bounty hunter Sledge is going to be coming for these spheres to help him rule the galaxy and use the spheres for evil", then also out of the canister came a orange being with 7 small horns on the top of his head and wearing a red hooded cloak with a staff in his hand,
"Princess Shayla is right, we mean no harm to you, my name is Keeper and I am the mentor to a team of superheroes called the Dino Charge Power Rangers."
Outside the Everfree Forest two humans one male and one female were running toward a clearing out of breath, "Got to find Keeper and tell him what happened to others" said the male who had long black hair to the female with red hair tied in a ponytail with black rimmed glasses, these two were Koda, A Cro-Magnon Caveman and the Blue Dino Charge Ranger and Dr. Kendall Morgan, The Co Mentor and the Purple Dino Charge Ranger, After running for a while they came across a small cottage "Come on Koda let's head toward that cottage, this is where Keeper's tracker is showing up." said Kendall.
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Oof. This needs a proofreader. And a bit of an edit. Here's a useful pointer.
This entire paragraph is one massive sentence, and you have multiple characters talking in the same pragraph. These are big no-nos for two main reasons;
1. You are not James Joyce.
2. If we don't have the characters split up into several paragraphs, it can become very hard to figure out who is speaking. In this paragraph alone, we have three characters talking and no idea who is meant to be speaking when.
Why did fluttershy seem so surprised when she saw the others? Also, I’m curious to know if they’re gonna be good rangers.
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They are going to be good Rangers and The reason Fluttershy was surprised was she had her back turned and was working in her garden and was not expecting company
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It's my first time writting a fanfic I have never done something like this
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I would personally recommend finding somebody to help you with the story. This is not meant as an attack on you; I was a new author once as well.
Here's a group that can help.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors
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But other then the errors what did you think of the story?
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Certainly captures the spirit of Power Rangers well.
I used to love Power Rangers. Especially Dino Charge.
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My story is tieing in elements from Dino Charge and Wild Force
This looks good. I've read the story "Power Rangers: Guardians of Harmony". I even posted a video to commerate that story.
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Thank you
I wonder which previous Ranger team/generation the girls team up with.
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I am teaming them up with Mighty Morphin Blue, Lost Galaxy Yellow, Megaforce Black and Blue, Jungle Fury Purple, Wild Force Sliver and Yellow, Mystic Force Blue, Time Force Red And Pink, Mystic Force Green, Dino Thunder Red, All the Dino Charge Rangers, and Tommy Oliver with his Master Morpher, and The Red Space Ranger