I was under the impression that Chestnut was an only child with how the story spoke of how he took on all the work. Sad to see he’s a deadbeat. What’s next? A little sister thats been away at boarding school? lol
I like how slow they’re taking it. I read so many stories for the bone-ing. It’s nice to read good stories that focus on the implications of doing it.
11732080 Chestnut and Cedar are both far from deadbeats. I was going to explain later in the story that Cedar is a lumberjack, and while near his homeplace, he's a surprisingly good/hard worker. Just needs some attitude adjustment.
I'm super happy to see this updated as i found Chestnut and CJs dynamic so cute, also loved the latest chapter and it didn't feel rushed at all, only mistake i saw was
he looks through the isles anyhow
When talking about shopping its aisles, isle would be island
I somehow never found this, probably because I filter out stuff on hiatus and cancelled fics, pretty unique I have to say.
I've read a lot of words on here in my 10+ year tenure, looks really promising because it's not just spicy because it needs to be.
You lay out the emotions well by showing rather than telling more often than not, which is just so much better in my opinion. I also like the fact that Chestnut isn't some completely clueless rube even though he has next to no experience with intimacy, blockheads are cringe.
I just love the maturity him and CJ have in general as well, I'm sure they will have their share of difficulties, but it's great when they're not 'woe is me' over every contrived issue.
Huh, you got me to write 4 paragraphs on my phone which is more of an achievement than you'd think, I'm usually a 👍 kinda guy and that's it, so excellent job!
I'm doing my best to progress the story in a way that's not boring to read, but also not a metaphorical fuckfest through and through. I want them to experience their ups and downs! They've (in practical terms) only just met, so for now it's going to be mostly ups—in a sexual and get-along sense.
I never realized how hard it was to write realistic characters. Probably spent too much time RPing on the side, or something cringe like that.
Thank you (again!) for your comment. I'm not the greatest at expressing my liking for seeing feedback in the comment section of my story, but I genuinely appreciate each and every little one I get.
Very, very well done.
I love the story and I love the way they interact. They make a good couple.
Monk
“Her hands were still bound with rope, she debated an escape before all the stupidity gave her an aneurysm.” -Scarheart
Welcome back to the land of updates. :D This is a great read.
Love to see this story back!
I was under the impression that Chestnut was an only child with how the story spoke of how he took on all the work. Sad to see he’s a deadbeat. What’s next? A little sister thats been away at boarding school? lol
I like how slow they’re taking it. I read so many stories for the bone-ing. It’s nice to read good stories that focus on the implications of doing it.
Looking at the upload dates, welcome back! This is cute, honestly. i like it
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Chestnut and Cedar are both far from deadbeats. I was going to explain later in the story that Cedar is a lumberjack, and while near his homeplace, he's a surprisingly good/hard worker. Just needs some attitude adjustment.
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Well it’s good to know that his brother isn’t a complete lost cause. :)
Wow a LumbarJack! Maybe there is merit to him getting ladies. Just a little.
I'm super happy to see this updated as i found Chestnut and CJs dynamic so cute, also loved the latest chapter and it didn't feel rushed at all, only mistake i saw was
When talking about shopping its aisles, isle would be island
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Fixed!
I somehow never found this, probably because I filter out stuff on hiatus and cancelled fics, pretty unique I have to say.
I've read a lot of words on here in my 10+ year tenure, looks really promising because it's not just spicy because it needs to be.
You lay out the emotions well by showing rather than telling more often than not, which is just so much better in my opinion. I also like the fact that Chestnut isn't some completely clueless rube even though he has next to no experience with intimacy, blockheads are cringe.
I just love the maturity him and CJ have in general as well, I'm sure they will have their share of difficulties, but it's great when they're not 'woe is me' over every contrived issue.
Huh, you got me to write 4 paragraphs on my phone which is more of an achievement than you'd think, I'm usually a 👍 kinda guy and that's it, so excellent job!
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Thanks!
I'm doing my best to progress the story in a way that's not boring to read, but also not a metaphorical fuckfest through and through. I want them to experience their ups and downs! They've (in practical terms) only just met, so for now it's going to be mostly ups—in a sexual and get-along sense.
I never realized how hard it was to write realistic characters. Probably spent too much time RPing on the side, or something cringe like that.
Thank you (again!) for your comment. I'm not the greatest at expressing my liking for seeing feedback in the comment section of my story, but I genuinely appreciate each and every little one I get.
Stay tuned! <3