YES! Finally it's out! I can't wait for the next chapter

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I'm glad you like it.

Did you know that I put Cartoon Cat in it, and made a reference to SirenHead?

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Didn't see the Siren Head reference

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"In one dream, it ended with her being torn in half by a monster with two sirens for a head."

It's in this line.

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Oh, now I feel kinda stupid.

Guess I was a little too exited about this finally coming out

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It's ok, everyone makes mistakes.

Don't worry, all is forgiven.

Like the story and Silent Hill is one of my... No, my favorite horror franchise, specially the first game, I still remember the nights playing around the bloody halls of the school with dark kids wilding knifes coming at you from every direction.

Anyway, just one thing to pick, if you accept, change the name to Twilight, calling her Sci-Twi breaks the immersion you're trying to build. That's it then, hope it helps, keep up the good work.

this... is exactly the kind of thing i see happening in a Silent Hill Equestria Girls collab of any sort.

the unwitting victim of the cursed mist at their wits end, desperate for whatever relief they feel they need.
only to unknowingly be stepping towards the resolution they truly deserve.

now, to see how the events of the descent into Sci-Twi's psyche unfold.

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I bet you have seen that I made a lot of references to Trevor Henderson monsters, including Siren Head, The Smile Room, The Bridge Worm, The Man with the Upside down face, and the most obvious one, Cartoon Cat.

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Trevor Henderson is unknown to me aside from Siren Head, actually....

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I didn't get the creatures at first thinking, those are not Silent hill monster, what the heck! Now I know them but we'll, I feel like it would have been better to use o my Silent Hill creatures, sorry, my opinion only.

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Don't worry, there will be Silent Hill monsters, The Trevor Henderson monsters are going to be used as boss battle's or in hallucinations.

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Oh, I see, good luck then. Waiting to read it.

Twilight could also hear the mouths saying something like, "Ritual," or something like that.

It's the invisible monster from SH2.

Anyway good to see a Silent Hill Story set in Equestria Girls.