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cant blame him for what he did but teaming up with sombra bad choice.
2153273 It is all according to plan. And in the episode where they find that the last page was torn from the book, it was me :3
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2153322 I bet the last thought inside that biker's head was 'OH fuck me...I should have listened to science.'
Erm...
I am not sure why someone would want to listen to a madman killing people, but sure.
But yay, finally he does something original by teaming up with the badguy.
I swear if this will end in sunshine, singing, crystal empire unschated and rainbows...
Also a few sentences are long with no real purpose, like this one:
This seems much better, atleast in my eyes:
There are more of these that I could point out if you like
2156095 Well good for me cause I ain't gonna make the ending for this section like that, ending with rainbows and butterflies and that shit, oh no it gonna go down like jonestown.
2156110 Yes, please point those out, my crappy pc doesn't have auto correct or spell check when I type this up, even microsoft word doesn't seem to work for me so yea, find any errors or shit that doesn't make much sense and just send it my way to change it.
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Sure. I will try to find the rest, if there are any. But tomorrow, since I have what Satan would call a mild cough.
2153315 lol seems legit :)
...I would doom the Crystal ponies for a single Quarian, too. Hell, I'd doom anyone for a single Quarian. :3
2166691 We know, hell I would doom everyone for a Quarian.
2252882>>2252691>>2252274 I am taking your comments under advisement and I have come up with this conclusion.
If you do not like it than you can go down to the local store, go buy some bleach, use said bleach on your eyes and brain so you do not have to worry about this story, and than you can just get out.
Have a nice day.
2272648 Im still writing redwings bio but short vertion is the imotalty and lighting powers are blow back from a blood spell he starswirl and a earth pony named apple seed did to creat the elements long ago. he clams to have goten the worst curse starswirl got magic knowlage dumped in his head that later drove him insane (the bell had a perpus) and apple seed became a true stude with over 200 kids and 35 wifves (heard family and the reson apple family is so big).
as to the fang well how said it was pulled it could have been broken out besides it give dicord a pony that he be scared of a alicorn that neglected magic in faver of phical power and has and dose use his chaose magic in ernest. i mean discord dose pranks stary idea of a prank is droping a 12 tire ckae of choclet covered meat on top of celly encanted so only she can eat her way out... beond that she get crule. shes not a nice pony to celly or dicord (who she wants to kill and has tryed to destroy 3 time when he was stone she felt he should have been exsacuted) so yeah threts to eat or kill ponys and will in public disrspect celly caling her Molestia in frount of crowds and rattle off the names she knows of ponys she banged... as redwing laughts his flank off.
The twins know anuff to fight there not grand masters not yet any ways.
i try my best to spell but im mentaly disabled so if i dont know a award i make a best guessjust ask if you want any details on the family there ill be happy to tell you. also i am working there bios as redwing story but its still being writen.
And he found his sword it was not pony made one look and Z will beable to tell the sword "Goddess of Victory" was not forged by ponys. Namly the fact that ist sized for a human.
2272870 Clean it all up. Start from scratch.
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it is cleaned up i spent a hour on typing that. i cant do any better with out a cumputer(on 360) no spellcheck no word no computer. i have mental disorder it looks right to me so if its wrong i dont know what is.
2311641 thats what the bonus chapters are for, just wait for the hearts and hooves day and the hearths warming eve chapters come out.
2167720 Keelah Se'lai!