I see now why you said it was something that was hard to do, and you're not sure even you could pull it off. The part that bothers me about this, isn't so much the characters involved, but how the resolution of the previous story's effects happens.

Faust just basically saying, "Fuck me and you'll be fine later," doesn't sit right with me as a resolution to Dusk's issues. I like that things didn't go as planned, an oddly humanizing feat for a supposed creator, but just literally writing away the problems doesn't work. She should know that that's not how trauma works, considering she's supposedly written everyone's lives. Yet she just flicks a pen across a page and bam, Dusk's issues are supposed to be gone. It's annoying to me since those issues were something I looked forward to being tackled in a sequel. For them to just be written out of existence in some deus ex machina maneuver by Faust, while fitting with the idea of a grand writer/creator, still leaves a bad taste in my mouth.

Well this was a fun really, didn't expect him to Fuck Fausticorn herself so soon, I was expecting more of a teasing and romance before the actual clopping. Still it was nice seeing you around again.

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Don't worry the sequel will tackle this issue. This is a filler so to speak

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Glad I wasn't blown out of the water, so to speak.

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so either she did mind manipulation on him or flat out forced him well agian? either way im pretty sure this wont go like she wants it to go and she also showned him how things work in the world so now he knows if he falls again even she will be in the danger zone
(i dont know how to black things out so i tryed to keep it good enough to understand if you read it but not detailed enough to be spoilers)

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The way it comes across to me, and the way Faust explains it, is that Dusk ain't gonna remember fucking the literal creator of their world, but instead that some weird shit happened and that he's fine now. Now maybe Faust, instead of just one line writing away his issues, wrote a goddamn 60 page novella in a short span of time explaining how he got over his issues, but the way it's presented in the text gives off the impression that she writes like, a line or two into Dusk's book and calls it a day.

this work?
the only one or two lines give me worry as she had to use one bit to make sure that he wont remember it and another to "fix" him so im just worrted that the next we see of him will be this quick fix not working well and fate messes with him again possibly making the memory of meeting her come back and if fate messes up to the point he falls again then a villen with dusks knolage of magic and how things work now would be a real danger to everything

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How so?

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I expected fans to kill me for righting clip on the creator herself.

Fausticorn needs love to

Also this was good it opens a lot of paths for dusk
But I agree that fate will change everything, even against the will of a goodness

Maybe someone got a new sister

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The tru sequel will open many doors.

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As everything on the multiverse should

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You have the speed writing part down. In truth, I wanted to add more to this but it would be irrelevant now or in the future. As you said, those few short seconds for her to write something down, time is in her control. She creates other beings other things. Nota few at a time, she writes the lives of many at a single time. I wanted to explain how just her opening the book of a creature, she has already written, from start to finish their lives in a few strokes of her quills. In short because of her divinity, she could write the lives of billions, perhaps trillions in a single moment.
Dusks future and her plans for him were already done on that book before he had time to blink, despite his long lifespan.

Heh, that was fun. Got a little off the rails but there are only so many sharks you can jump.
It's interesting that she said she fixed him. That's a heavy statement loaded with concern, usually implying psyche construction. We'll see we guess...
It's true fate can be changed, self evident with all the branches (meta: fanfiction). The question is, which one, if any, are the actual "true" fate?
Keep going! ;)

I enjoyed it! Glad to see it’ll be continuing and can’t wait to read about how Dusk and Nightmare Moons reunion goes!

My boy nuts inside the Creator herself, the absolute Mad Stallion.

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Who you think gave him that idea?

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I KNOW I WILL BLOW YOU OUT OF THE WATER FOR IT!!!!
GIVE NIGHTMARE MOON AND DUSK THEIR HAPPY ENDING DANM IT!!!!!

PLUS, you just don't go and fuck the creator and it just fixes the problem like that....

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An ending is coming, worry not. And fucking a creator sure would fix everything because if the creator created everything including all the problems in your life, isn't fucking them just getting even and saying its all on you?

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I mean, as in write it out in a story buddy....

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That too!

This was pretty neat. Technically canon but technically not (as Dusk won't remember anything anyways), with a leadup to a new story

Do the villianesses receive any form of punishment for what they did?

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The sequel will explain. That bit

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The sequel will explain. That bit

The sequel will explain.

The sequel

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Dusk froze. The images around him quickly formed and began showing images of the creatures… the evil beings that had tortured, raped and nearly killed him.

That's a job only half done.