This was a fun and interesting beginning, I can't wait to see where this goes.

Starlight has had a crush on anon since she was gifted the framed photo on her end table by him, it was such a sweet gift, and something clicked inside of her and she developed a crush on him, on the spot.

I don’t think I understand what this is saying.

“ Excuse my language Trixie, but WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU!” Starlight yells at her friend with rage.

Or

“ Excuse my language Trixie, but WHAT THE BUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU!” Starlight yells at her friend with rage.