It’s no secret that Spike wants Rarity, but what isn’t so well known is Rainbow’s crush on Spike. In a desperate bid to steal the young man’s heart, she singles him out when they have a moment all to themselves to make her move.
Yeah, I agree with Hirow. Judging by Spike’s mention of the “palace,” I get that this is a humanized version of Equestria. However, the use of “mare” instead of “woman” is kinda throwing me off. Other than that, everything looks fine.
Nice start! Looking forward to more ^^
Ohhhhhh the non-con tag. Interesting. I wonder where this will lead too?
This is a really good start. The only thing that concerns me is the Non-Con tag.
" he was good to make any mare happy" if they are all humans then this quote is wrong
Yeah, I agree with Hirow. Judging by Spike’s mention of the “palace,” I get that this is a humanized version of Equestria. However, the use of “mare” instead of “woman” is kinda throwing me off. Other than that, everything looks fine.
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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Are you doing a human and an anthro story for each girl spike gets lucky with?
Wow. I don't even like Rainbow Dash that much and this first chapter already has me hooked! Well done, can't wait to see how this develops.
This looks promising. But I do have to point out a couple of head-scratchers.