SORRY ALL, QUICKLY REFRESH IF YOU ARE CURRENTLY READING IT NOW (10:38 p.M Central), there is a crucial minor detail regarding how one of the minor characters looks.

Unoriginal forced loss of innocence is unoriginal.

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Ok. So next week, the next chapter comes up?

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Lmao, totally didn't plan to finish it exactly a week later. It just depends how my RL schedule is, may be in three days or could be two weeks.

Meanwhile, on the other side of the portal near Brussels

The SS officer examines the area one more time, finding a trail of strange hoof prints clearly not belonging to any horse he has ever seen. Being almost a perfect circle and the size of a normal horse's hoof, but not as deep as it should be. Deciding to follow the tracks, he slings his MP40 over his shoulder. He then heads towards his motorcycle, then gets back on it and slowly drives beside the trail to find out where they lead to.

Please tell me that they close the portal???!!!

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Hope it comes out soon. Because, I like to have the Mane Six found out the truth. Or the entirety of Equestria actually, and finally learn about the another world of Planet Earth with Humanity. But it's at another world war wth each other.

Or that they will FINALLY learn that we are called "Humans". And learn a horrible realization that Both WW1 and WW2 AREN'T the only Wars on Planet Earth. We sadly have a VERY nasty habit of fighting each other. That we even have over a Hundred Wars back-to-back, between our Thousands Years of History.

But, Both WW1 and WW2 are the more bloodiest and deadly, so far.

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with how celestia ususaly does things its unlikely

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Welp, then they are totally screwed!!!!!! Because, Hitler ( Or Stalin) would no doubt like to have another world to rule ( Equestria). Or use the Ponies and other MLP Creatures as "Loyal" ( Forced them to be ) Soldiers, Labor, etc..

Shining Armor salutes Princess Celestia with his wing

Pretty sure he does have one of those (yet) ...

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Depends on how far behind them he becomes, it's on a 3 hour auto-shutdown ...

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Seriously?! Three FRICKIN Hours??!! I thought that the portal would hold a little while, so it will give those two Ponies time to make a run for it to the portal. BUT, since the Two-Pony Team: "Grey Team" already went though the portal already, BUT the portal is still left on for some reason??!! For the entirely of the Three Hour Limit??!!

What kind of a Reckless IDIOT created that type of a Portal Spell, that leaves a portal OUT IN THE OPEN!!!!! And could give the hostile enemy ( Nazi Germany) a chance to find it, and discover the ponies, other MLP Races, and a NEW world to conquer. IF that Nazi SS Officer finds that portal, and starts killing innocent ponies ( Just because their not human, nor being Nazi Germany's "Master Race" candidates).

That will be Celestia's own F******* fault for creating that STUPID Dimensional Portal Spell, that lasts for a long time, even when the pony teams already went though it, BUT it's still left open. Long enough for Nazi Germany to invaded their dumbasses.

I think this should be addressed in the next chapter. That Celestia is HEAVILY Scolded to have created that dumb spell in the first place. Thus, unintentionally letting a Nazi SS Officer of all people, in Equestria. And that the blood of her innocent "little ponies" is on HER hooves, by leaving the dimensional portal on for Three Hours!!!!!!!!!!!

It's NOT "Team Grey's" ( Dork Fish and Big Dip's ) fault! Because, they haven't created that type of spell in the first place. Celestia DID!!! So, this is most definitely her fault for letting a Nazi SS Officer to slaughter her "precious" Ponies.

Hope the Author ( The Loner ) reads this as well.

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oops lmfao

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Believe me, there will be hell to pay if that SS officer finds the portal.

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For who? Celestia being blamed? Or karmic punishment for the Nazi SS Officer himself?

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Wait and see, wait and you will see.

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Okay. I just think that Celestia should still be blamed. I mean, leaving a portal for THREE HOURS is a very, VERY high risk. And will obviously expose your Equestrian World to the wrong people ( Like Nazi Germany ).

It makes sense IF you have closed the portal STRAIGHT AWAY. Like all the other Normal Dimensional Portals have should in media. Like Doctor Strange closing his portals right after he went though them.

It would been better if Celestia could had shorten the time limit for the portal being left open for only 1 Hour, or 30 Minutes. Heck, the Ponies will be very lucky if it was only 5 Minutes, or 10-15 Minutes could be reasonable as well. But, over Three Hours?! That will obviously lead to disaster!

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Hmmm, you know that the mirror portal (ESQ/Sunset Shimmer) is a three day auto-close with a 30 moon down time til Twilight made whenever needed (but no auto-close, manual) ...

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Well, this is different. We are in a middle of a WAR! And leaving a portal to your world, thus allowing very bad people ( Nazi Germany) to come to your poor innocent world is a VERY POOR decision on Celestia's part. This is WHY I'm making a very big deal out of it.

At least in the Equestria Girls Movie. The Threat of Bully Sunset Shimmer isn't so bad or anything. She DOESN'T have tons of Guns, a hostile Army, Tanks, Planes, Motorcycles, Ships, and Submarines of a Fascist Nation like Nazi Germany does!!!!!!

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Just thought of something, since we don't know all the particulars of the spell, the three hour window might be the smallest it can be (due to power requirements to open them in the first place) ... Also, we don't know what it looks like on the other side (yet, thinking EQG) ...

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What do you mean on the other side? It just shows the Original Pony World, and our human world during WW2 ( 1939-1945 ).

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Think about EQG, it's a stone arch and it doesn't look different until used (and thinking about going through it isn't going to be the first thing to think of either), plus that's if the nearby ground shows the hoofprints leading to it ...

Now Spring Break had its portal under a layer of sand, again the first thought is not going to be someone went through it ...

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I don't know if the author wants to reference the Equestria Girls Spin-off Series with the Portals. But, we are in the far past ( WW2 Era/Very Late 1930's to Early/Mid 1940's. ) than the modern 21 Century of Equestria Girls. And we haven't even seen or know where Sunset is, right about now. Hope the Author could answer both our questions.

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what are you talking about? What stone arch, you mean the statue?

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As for Sunset Shimmer, I haven't decided if I am going to bring her in to play yet.

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Okay.

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Yep, one arch on the base of the statue ...

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I have searched the second chapter, but I can't find what it is you are talking about. Are you talking about the portal in Equestria Girls?

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Ahhhm yes, talking about the EQG end-portal (you haven't shown us the human side-portal [or even the pony side]) ...

Was pointing out that there's a also finding that portal if it's not that noticeable (hoof prints in front of it) ...

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oh, my bad. I will get to it as soon as I can.

Cadence stares in shocked horror at the head, its terrified expression stuck on the face. Suddenly her rump collapses to the ground as she suddenly lifts her head and starts screaming at the horrifying scene of gore. Her mind loses focus and stops the spell as she continues to scream when she returns to Celestia's room. Upon noticing the change in scenery, she stops screaming and looks around the room frantically trying to figure out where she is and fails, "Where am I? I do not recognize this place." She then looks to the other pony in front of her, "Excuse me, do you know where I am?"

The princess pulls her into a hug as she gets her freakout under control, letting her tears fall from her face freely, "Calm down my little pony, calm down. Your name is Cadence, you are an alicorn. My name is Princess Celestia, and you are special someponies with Shining Armor, Twilight Sparkle's brother. You are also her foalsitter when she was young, right now you are in my room inside the city of Canterlot. You are safe here, nothing is going to harm you."

The light pink alicorn's eyes return to their normal size as she calms down and remembers who, and where she is, as well as what she saw in the other world.

I forgot to ask you this from before? What the heck happened to Cadence?! Did she get very severe memory loss from the mental trauma??!!

There is chapter two for you all, now working on getting the others finished and up.

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The real question is, who the fuck cares?