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I feel like there's a trend of killing off your main character that's so overused in every form of media, that it's become boring. Invested? Too bad, they all die, life sucks get a helmet, blah blah blah. I felt like hitting every single high note and not coming down from there. I won't lie; there was a very brief moment when I thought about killing him in the end, drive home the heroic nature of the man, but throughout the story, I felt like he deserved to win and win big.
Woof, that's a brutal way to end it. Can't say it doesn't fit though. Thanks for the story SGTBRONY, it was an honest, unashamedly pulpy ride from start to finish, and that's just what the doctor ordered.
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Been a pleasure sharing it with you my friend. Thanks for all the support!
Winner winner chicken dinner
This was an amazing ride from start to finish. If this were in print form, I would buy it hands down.
My only criticisms would be the lack of spacers between scene transitions and the pacing for the final few chapters.
Between scenes, adding some sort of identifier like a straight line or several spaces would help to ensure there's no confusion between the scenes and prevent any jarring transitions. Pacing wise it's fine as is, but feels slightly rushed. It was still enjoyable nonetheless.
This fic has been one of the best I've read in years, I hope it gets recognized for it's quality.
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Wow. Thank you so much for the feedback and the high praise. I read and re-read the whole thing a few time, picking it apart, and I came to the same conclusions, could've been paced a touch better, and the transitions were rough.
I've been trying to get back into writing, and to read the things you wrote makes me think I'm on the right track. Thank you for taking the time.
Above and beyond all of this, I'm so glad that you enjoyed the ride, I definitely enjoyed writing it.
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This was so enjoyable that I've even shared it with friends despite the initial embarrassment that it's technically a MLP Fanfic.
I'd love to read more of your work in the future. If you have any plans, please do make a blog post.
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That's awesome, I hope your friends like it as much as you did! I never really thought my writing was anything special, but I'm going to continue all the same. I'll definitely post a blog about it so you can keep track. Thanks again for the support and the kind, honest review. Look forward to sharing more in the future!
Dude like how is this not featured yet. This shit is A fucking one. RAH
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I'm glad you enjoyed it, it was a blast to write.
Man icing on the cake with the comeuppance for Ivanov, seriously one of the best stories I've read on this site in a long time this will be on the favorites list.
For Scotty and Raven.
Had to come back and read this story for a second time, damn it still has the same feels so good!
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Quite the compliment man!
This should be good...