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Send us in sir. I'm dying to kill some commie fucks now, hooah!
You kind of wrote yourself into a bit of a corner here. Characters we have some attachment to have died, but we don't have any attachment to any of the characters that the hero might avenge them on, and its a little late to add one.
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A fair point. I wrote in Lyra's death to drive home the indiscriminate nature of war and the cruelty of the other side in contrast to our heroes, who skirt that line, maybe even cross it, but it's done with a particular purpose in mind, rather than pure bloodlust. To directly address your concern, I wanted that frustration that comes with a lack of someone to point the finger at. Did those two Griffons kill her? Or is her killer still out there? That sense of maybe getting justice with an asterisk would haunt me, so I tried to convey it in the chapter. Poor Lyra was only a vehicle that I know we all care about to drive the point home. Thanks for bringing it up, all the same, I hope my explanation satisfies.
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Fair enough; please continue.
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Already working on the next chapter. Barring any sort of catastrophe, it should be out in the next few hours.
Huh... Interesting. You gave her Belle as a surname. Makes good sense~