She stepped out from behind the desk and crossed the room, answering my question as she came. "I apologize for the somewhat cloak and dagger way I arranged the meeting, but I believe you will not be disappointed in what I have to say. Please, sit." She finished, indicating one of the floor pillows. I obliged as the Princess settled in across from me. She regarded me carefully for a moment before she spoke.

Ha! I see what ya did here, and it’s real clever I say!

Bury this attraction; it won't lead you anywhere good.

Oh geez man! 😂 *popcorn eating intensifies*

Hmm hot damn~ not gonna lay my appreciation of this story too thickly but I'm really enjoying what I've read thus far.

As far as constructive criticism goes, so far I got none. Story flow was good, grammar and punctuatuon good, and characterization of established characters like the princess is done just right.

Also I'm quite excited to know you're here and active still, judging from your earlier reply on my comment (lol nice to make your acquaintance)... I say this because I've been here since 2014 and nowadays most stories I come across that I end up liking have been written by writers long gone.

Bear with me though, I'm a talkative reader. Can't help not to leave comments or reactions after finishing a chapter of a story I'm reading, specially if it's good.

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You're gonna need some more popcorn lol. I appreciate it, I wrote this to try and get back into the writing game and I was honestly shocked at how well-received it was. I was worried about pacing, characterization, the whole niner, but in the end, I just decided to let it ride. I'm glad to see that I hit my marks thus far. As far as being a talkative reader? I welcome the feedback and thoughts on the work that I've put out, so no worries there.

I'm not going anywhere either, this show and the world they built captured and held me since 2011, I took a loooong hiatus mostly because of life issues, but now that I'm back, I'm going to keep writing until they shut this place down.