The Adagio/Flash relationship is still great. She and Illiana appear to be getting along together nicely. If I were to choose who Flash should be with, it would be Adagio.
I'm a little disappointed that Adagio just...reforms like that, but I really like the setup of this story. I love the relationship between Adagio and Flash in this as well.
10306525 Dagi is simply stating her desire to reform at this point. She will struggle with morally questionable decisions throughout the entire story. I apologize if I gave the impression that she was instantly converted to being a morally upstanding character. Otherwise, I'm glad that you're enjoying the story so far.
10306548 I thinks its because you did a full paragraph of her stating she just gives up all the evil in one go. I think it would be more believable with her saying she realizes the 'being evil' is pointless where she is right now, but doesn't know how to go from there.
But that's my opinion/viewpoint. This still works, I just thought it was way too quick and...well, you just see Adagio as being evil as a priority for her. Its in her character and personality, but that can be changed.
Alright I'm officially hooked on this story and I'm shipping Adagio & Flash M. like crazy! I hope things go well during the games without a hitch and part of me hopes Illiana joins them on their Journey, when this is over... For anime reasons
P.S. Speaking Illiana, anyone else kind of imagined her as a young version of Xena? I don't mean that in any disrespect, Enclave.
Ok I enjoy this one
Great chapter!
The Adagio/Flash relationship is still great. She and Illiana appear to be getting along together nicely. If I were to choose who Flash should be with, it would be Adagio.
I'm a little disappointed that Adagio just...reforms like that, but I really like the setup of this story. I love the relationship between Adagio and Flash in this as well.
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Dagi is simply stating her desire to reform at this point. She will struggle with morally questionable decisions throughout the entire story. I apologize if I gave the impression that she was instantly converted to being a morally upstanding character. Otherwise, I'm glad that you're enjoying the story so far.
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I thinks its because you did a full paragraph of her stating she just gives up all the evil in one go. I think it would be more believable with her saying she realizes the 'being evil' is pointless where she is right now, but doesn't know how to go from there.
But that's my opinion/viewpoint. This still works, I just thought it was way too quick and...well, you just see Adagio as being evil as a priority for her. Its in her character and personality, but that can be changed.
Interesting hints at Adagio's history. We'll see how long her current attitude lasts...
Alright I'm officially hooked on this story and I'm shipping Adagio & Flash M. like crazy! I hope things go well during the games without a hitch and part of me hopes Illiana joins them on their Journey, when this is over... For anime reasons
P.S. Speaking Illiana, anyone else kind of imagined her as a young version of Xena? I don't mean that in any disrespect, Enclave.
This was a really fun and interesting chapter I hope Flash makes a harem .
Oh, this is different alright since women were banned from the Olympic Games, though the AU tag makes it ok.