Hi there! My name is Jack, better known as JackLikesPancakes.
This story contains about a month and two weeks worth of writing, which was all done on the notes app on the iPhone. Trust me, writing this on the iPhone was no easy task; it's like trying to type using your fists. If any words appear to be out-of-context (for example, the word "have" might be replaced by "half" or "ham") it is completely AutoCorrect's fault. And mine for not catching it.
This is my first FIMfiction.net story. It's not how I'd usually write. ESPECIALLY when regarding something as innocent as a children's cartoon. But I know from personal experience that people read in to shock values. No one likes to play it safe in the writing world. Do you think that Suzanne Collins considered re-writing "The Hunger Games" or "Mockingjay" to make child slaughter more appealing? BUCK NO! She stood her ground and made a fully enjoyable suspenseful book! And that's what I intend to try with my first submission, Sealing The Envelope.
Now I know there's a lot of submissions out there, and this might be lost in the shuffle, so PLEASE leave a comment about what I can do better or what I did well with this story. I intend to return, maybe with a less sad story. I may give comedy or adventure a try if I can get enough love in the reviews.
Thanks, and enjoy!
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Hey, that's it! You guys are awesome for reading this! Hey, I'll make it worth your while! When you comment, write "IHOP" at the bottom of your review and I will add you to a list of favorite authors AND check out your story! I know I'm probably going to do it with everyone who reviews my story, but I think you deserve a little something for sitting through this completely skippable forward. Just remember, that's "IHOP" at the end of your review.
Thanks again!
`~JackLikesPancakes
this is awesome. it needs moar views.
IHOP
@wubstep pony: Noted.
@Joy Stick: thank you for bringing that up! I was battling on whether she was Ditzy Doo or Dinky Doo. I guess I chose wrong!
This is an incredible premise. I only got so far, however. Marked the rest in read later. I really hope that this doesn't end up becoming like so many other amazing stories that just gets drowned beneath swirling torrents of clopfics and HiE stories.
IHOP, if you want. You don't have to, though.
That was a great story IMO.
IHOP around btw
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Yes, yes. I should edit the name so it is correct. Thank you for the review!
Ihop alot my friend...infact, i believe i hop to and from your house very often! this story...made me cry as well. you are an amazing writer and i cant wait to hear more!
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Thank you!
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And a Twilight in a pear tree~!
Thank you. I'm new to all this and this is the warmest welcome I have ever received. I have fixed the errors, but the original still remains. So, could somepony help a Net N00b out...
1198923 I would like to offer my help to you. Send me a PM with what you need help with and I can see what/if I can help you out.
Cheers!
FIXED EVERYTHING FINALLY
1197477>>1168678>>1189582>>1152968
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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES
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well done. have a Derpy.
Your story was an excellent read, and quite sad, even if I didn't cry (don't worry; I didn't cry whilst reading "My Little Dashie," so that's the fact I might be part robot or something). Well, you don't have to cry to find something depressing. This does deserve more praise, though, because it was good. Anyway, I hope to see more works from you later on.
IHOP, I suppose, but only add me as a favorite author if you want to by checking my one story first and see if I'm worth of being added. Just seems fairer to me.
I just cried and cried... good job!
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Thank you for the read!