An ancient paladin in service of the Light has been in hiding for millennia. A certain purple pony wishes to end his self imposed exile.
10247284Thank you very much friend! What are you most curious about?
Nice work Hun. Keep it up. Welcome to fimfic
I'm liking what I'm seeing so far! Your writing style needs a little bit of polish to shine, I think, but it's not bad at all! Plus, it's your first story, so a lot of slack can be given I look forward to how the lore will be expanded on in this.
10249097Yay! Thanks man, I really appreciate it.
Pretty great start
I typically don't read stories that aren't about Spike...but I think I'll be reading this one.
10247284
Thank you very much friend! What are you most curious about?
Nice work Hun. Keep it up. Welcome to fimfic
I'm liking what I'm seeing so far! Your writing style needs a little bit of polish to shine, I think, but it's not bad at all! Plus, it's your first story, so a lot of slack can be given I look forward to how the lore will be expanded on in this.
10249097
Yay! Thanks man, I really appreciate it.
Pretty great start
I typically don't read stories that aren't about Spike...but I think I'll be reading this one.