A stallion forced to fight for his life against terrifying creatures in the hostile future. A mare trying to save her dwindling present from certain destruction. A key from the past that may save the future.
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Thanks! Glad you are enjoying it so far!
Sorry about the rather slow pacing, but we've got plenty of ground to cover. I've got BIG plans for the overall plot of the story and am looking at somewhere around six acts total.
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Sorry for taking so much time to respond to the story, I am really busy with some projects at the moment and then I just got Netflix that I watch while working, it's hard I can't listen to the story like I usually can with my PC.
For the story I thing the setup is very interesting and I do like the premise of it, from what I can see it looks heavily influenced by gears of war but with your own twists on it. from the sound of the story their is not remnant Equestrian government or actually organized leadership left, which means that no one can build any new tec anymore and that the pony race is pretty much condemned to extinction very soon if these things managed to overwhelmed and destroy the crown's authority. I wonder if these creature are just a symptoms of a larger problem and that they are just a smaller threat then they seem? I wonder is their number of these creature are still growing on their own or his they are severely limited but the number of victims their can grabs, I wonder wonder what they feed on to stay alive if they don't actually eat their kills like that to consume them. So I take that he let that mare be rapped and killed, if I understand it right?
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No problem. I'm just glad you are enjoying it so far and are interested enough to begin to try and piece together the bigger picture.
Gears wasn't at the top of my influence list, but yeah I can see what you mean by it. The strange sci-fi tech was just beginning to see the light of day in the higher ranks of the Royal Guard. The ATS suit that Storm wears is a custom variant of the elite guard Suits. (Yes I stole the helmet assemble and HUD from Dead Space. Fucking love that series.) He has made some of his own modifications to it that you will see more of in the future.
No, Maverick and Storm are probably some of the few sane ones left and knew how fucked up it was to kill a pregnant mare and the foal growing inside. The yellow stallion hosting the snuffing was presumably a slave owner who managed to get himself known or feared enough to gain a small following or guards that surrounded the stage. I kind of left it open to the readers interpretation of how they freed her, but basically they killed the guards and the stallion. With nowhere else to go and feeling bad about the mare's foals, they let her join their group of survivors.
I might go back in and make that more clear. Chapter 3 was kinda rushed on a burst of inspiration and lack of sleep.