A stallion forced to fight for his life against terrifying creatures in the hostile future. A mare trying to save her dwindling present from certain destruction. A key from the past that may save the future.
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Sorry for missing the last chapter update, I ws not in the best of moods at the time. I lvery much like the two last chapter, while still mainly focused on the action, I think it had a resepctible ballance of analisist and character exploration as well as some delight gorry scene which my sadist side was satisfied. I did think the lengh of the chapters were much better this time, stopping just before it was overstating its welcome. I did love the exploration of Storm's relastions with his father and seeing his (selfish) perspective on things and how Storm is this time trying to fight back against it rather the repressing it like before, showing a little improvement on his end in having a better sense of what were his struggles in his yough; i wonder how come his grandfather relashions mentioned from much earlier seemed much more holsome for him then his father and hope we get to see his side of the story in this. I think Zekora is showing to be an interesting character to have and I was suprised that you desided to show things in her POW, but I would have been curious to know how what her relations with ponyville was over the years for her afther everything went to hell. It was interesting to see some of cannon characters from ponyville, and I wonder what drak faith was planned for them form turning into monsters of become some sort of breather to spawn them, which already sounds more horrible to me.
I wonder who is that Twilight lookalike pegasus mare?
All in all I really had little to no complains about the chapters it didn't linger too long on one single thing and went with a more even well rounded rout. keep it up dude