10146113 Yep. A lot of it was inspired by many different stories all over FIMFiction, while the name of Iskalia was taken from the villainess of Ys SEVEN Tialuna Rem Iskalia, whose last name became the name of the empire.
rouse the 'jacks! arm the casters! ready the trenchers, the gun mages and the storm guard! call upon the stormsmiths! awaken the colossi! prime the battle engines!
10146577 "Thank you. Your men and machines will prove valuable to our cause. I have a feeling they would work well with the cannons of the Kingdom of Frost, the mages of the Arcane Legion and the monks of the Kingdom of Sondra."
10146624 I wonder if my warhammer 40k titan (Erigion Equitus) will be welcomed for this.
I will explain his equipment.
He has 2 Gatling cannons for his arms. Under the Gatling are 2 twin linked chain swords. On each side of the chain swords is a flamer. On his back center is a rocket pod. On top of both of his shoulders is a double barrel auto cannon. Between his arm and head is a stuber with a Malta gun on a half ball turret on Both sides. His colors are black, royal blue, and gold trims. His simbol is a golden sun with a silver moon in its center.
Hmmm like the setting and plot but…the fact that the empire still allowed the five nations to be independent somewhat is kinda ridicules, after 3000 years all five nations should’ve been completely integrated with each other instead of just been ruled by the same empress.
I’ll stop there as whilst I have dozens of other issues they mostly involve the military and governmental structure of the Empire which I feel like you haven’t done enough research on.
I feel like researching on this might help with the military stuff if you know where to look.
Other then that I’m interested in where this story goes though I wouldn’t mind by the end of this you decided to rewrite this story as there definitely could be things done better or differently to make more sense in both Government and military.
10905606 I'm going to admit, I will be working on rewrites of this story. I've sadly been caught up with a lot of personal issues, and barely have time to write anymore. I do study history and use it as the basis for some events, but whenever I do, it tends to be an unwieldy chimera of ideas that need days, if not weeks of rewrites to completely iron out. Thanks for the link though, it might help me stay on track!
Genocide on Caribou? Really? Why?
There is no use in killing Dainn and his heathen.
They can grow wheat for Iskalia, after they're beaten.
"I fear we have awaken the sleeping giant."
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"And filled him with a terrible resolve."
-Admiral Isoroku Yamamoto (山本 五十六)
10145689
Indeed!
10145732
Okay, two things.
ONE: Nice reference to ERB.
TWO: I'll keep that in mind.
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Very nice.
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Thank you.
10145947
You are welcome
(for the sake of ScarFox9700's OCD and my sanity, the comments must be even)
Never heard of the name, but I love the banner. Did you do that yourself?
10146113
Yep. A lot of it was inspired by many different stories all over FIMFiction, while the name of Iskalia was taken from the villainess of Ys SEVEN Tialuna Rem Iskalia, whose last name became the name of the empire.
rouse the 'jacks! arm the casters! ready the trenchers, the gun mages and the storm guard! call upon the stormsmiths! awaken the colossi! prime the battle engines!
LET CYGNAR MARCH WITH ISKALIA!!
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"Thank you. Your men and machines will prove valuable to our cause. I have a feeling they would work well with the cannons of the Kingdom of Frost, the mages of the Arcane Legion and the monks of the Kingdom of Sondra."
-Empress Josta Romana Iskalia
10146624
I wonder if my warhammer 40k titan (Erigion Equitus) will be welcomed for this.
I will explain his equipment.
He has 2 Gatling cannons for his arms. Under the Gatling are 2 twin linked chain swords. On each side of the chain swords is a flamer. On his back center is a rocket pod. On top of both of his shoulders is a double barrel auto cannon. Between his arm and head is a stuber with a Malta gun on a half ball turret on Both sides. His colors are black, royal blue, and gold trims. His simbol is a golden sun with a silver moon in its center.
I hope you like👌
Hmmm like the setting and plot but…the fact that the empire still allowed the five nations to be independent somewhat is kinda ridicules, after 3000 years all five nations should’ve been completely integrated with each other instead of just been ruled by the same empress.
I’ll stop there as whilst I have dozens of other issues they mostly involve the military and governmental structure of the Empire which I feel like you haven’t done enough research on.
I feel like researching on this might help with the military stuff if you know where to look.
Other then that I’m interested in where this story goes though I wouldn’t mind by the end of this you decided to rewrite this story as there definitely could be things done better or differently to make more sense in both Government and military.
10905606
I'm going to admit, I will be working on rewrites of this story. I've sadly been caught up with a lot of personal issues, and barely have time to write anymore. I do study history and use it as the basis for some events, but whenever I do, it tends to be an unwieldy chimera of ideas that need days, if not weeks of rewrites to completely iron out. Thanks for the link though, it might help me stay on track!