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Silver Ghost


I'm just a normal dude from North Carolina who likes MLP:FiM, Group B, history, metal, Warhammer (Fantasy and 40K, AoS is okay), and I want to write stories for everyone to enjoy!

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Genocide on Caribou? Really? Why?
There is no use in killing Dainn and his heathen.
They can grow wheat for Iskalia, after they're beaten.

"I fear we have awaken the sleeping giant."

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"And filled him with a terrible resolve."
-Admiral Isoroku Yamamoto (山本 五十六)

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Okay, two things.

ONE: Nice reference to ERB.
TWO: I'll keep that in mind. :ajsmug:

(for the sake of ScarFox9700's OCD and my sanity, the comments must be even)

Never heard of the name, but I love the banner. Did you do that yourself?

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Yep. A lot of it was inspired by many different stories all over FIMFiction, while the name of Iskalia was taken from the villainess of Ys SEVEN Tialuna Rem Iskalia, whose last name became the name of the empire.

By any chance, is there going to be a strategist or a tactician later on? I mean you can't have any war battles without at least one or more strategists or tacticians.

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The empress IS the tactician! Sorry for sounding angry, but did you READ the first chapter?!

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Sorry, my mind kind of forgets sometimes on who's what and other things going on in other stories. Although, I am curious on which kind of strategy the Empress may have on the battlefield territory.

rouse the 'jacks! arm the casters! ready the trenchers, the gun mages and the storm guard! call upon the stormsmiths! awaken the colossi! prime the battle engines!

LET CYGNAR MARCH WITH ISKALIA!!

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(do not fear! I will keep the comment sec even!)

Comment posted by Silver Ghost deleted Mar 25th, 2020
Comment posted by Silver Ghost deleted Mar 25th, 2020

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"Thank you. Your men and machines will prove valuable to our cause. I have a feeling they would work well with the cannons of the Kingdom of Frost, the mages of the Arcane Legion and the monks of the Kingdom of Sondra."

-Empress Josta Romana Iskalia

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It doesn't really matter, but thanks anyways.

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Indeed. It reminds me of AoS (Age Of Sigmar) and 40K.

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but with a steampunk vibe to it and the gameplay is simplified to boot, can't wait to see more of this story btw, but the best comes to those who wait... AND give me time to make sure I have popcorn

"Fury..." the empress pondered, "That sounds like a good name." She turned to the newly named Fury. "By the order of the Eternal Empress, and the Gods of Man, I hereby, as of this day, christen thy name to be Fury."

The Fury name reminds me of that one intense movie.
thetruthaboutguns.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/10/fury_xlg-405x600.jpg

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Another inspiration, add it to the list!

As if on cue, distant booms were heard, then the whistle of an incoming shell, followed by the sound of it tearing through the wood of a food storage building and a loud explosion. Followed by many others. Both caribou and stallions sprinted through the streets as shells rained around them, screaming over their heads, and thudding onto the ground.

*makes happy trencher sounds* mmmm~~ I just LOVE artillery in the fucking morning~ it is the sound of hellfire striking down my foes just as I go over the top~ arty is king baby~

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Fixed it. But in a different way, I guess you could say. It goes to a different link but still has the same image.

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sorry, that is my 'Merica side talking... I enjoy artillery a bit too much some times because, in the game ruse, I was a "Turtle" type player

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I wonder if my warhammer 40k titan (Erigion Equitus) will be welcomed for this.

I will explain his equipment.

He has 2 Gatling cannons for his arms. Under the Gatling are 2 twin linked chain swords. On each side of the chain swords is a flamer. On his back center is a rocket pod. On top of both of his shoulders is a double barrel auto cannon. Between his arm and head is a stuber with a Malta gun on a half ball turret on Both sides. His colors are black, royal blue, and gold trims. His simbol is a golden sun with a silver moon in its center.


I hope you like👌

Comment posted by Silver Ghost deleted May 7th, 2020

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Two things, one, I could put it in, but I'd have to Bullshit my way out with a magic explanation, and two, I don't like a bullshit magic explanation.

Also, what do you mean by steamrolled?! Is it because of the ridiculous number of Iskalian soldiers?

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Hmmm, maybe. Look at my reply to the Rat King for the reasons why it's a maybe.

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realistically, a warjack would be believable here, mostly the charger war jack, hunter war jack may just be pushing it

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war jacks are from a game called war machine, they are like almost human-sized mechs controlled by a magical AI linked to what is called a 'war caster'... they are beyond different than a titan

'how are we going to fight the caribou when we meet on the battlefield?'

I find that shooting at them tends to work...

Yay!!!! This is such a good story I can't wait for more

Almost immediately after the letter was sent, 70,000 individuals, both Caribou and Equestrian alike, left the city, taking anything they could with them. With the resistance in the city gone, the Caribou lords in charge of the city let loose, giving in to their desires.

They should've been sus on why they left.

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I will admit, that was a flub on my part.

Hmmm like the setting and plot but…the fact that the empire still allowed the five nations to be independent somewhat is kinda ridicules, after 3000 years all five nations should’ve been completely integrated with each other instead of just been ruled by the same empress.

I’ll stop there as whilst I have dozens of other issues they mostly involve the military and governmental structure of the Empire which I feel like you haven’t done enough research on.

I feel like researching on this might help with the military stuff if you know where to look.

Other then that I’m interested in where this story goes though I wouldn’t mind by the end of this you decided to rewrite this story as there definitely could be things done better or differently to make more sense in both Government and military.

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I'm going to admit, I will be working on rewrites of this story. I've sadly been caught up with a lot of personal issues, and barely have time to write anymore. I do study history and use it as the basis for some events, but whenever I do, it tends to be an unwieldy chimera of ideas that need days, if not weeks of rewrites to completely iron out. Thanks for the link though, it might help me stay on track!

I'm now curious on how the Empress is going to do this war knowing her she might have a good tactic that will work. If it was me and I'm going to regret this but I would have used Blitzkrieg bombing. Not much on using Atomic/ nuclear strikes 😅

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