The Mane Six and Spike are this time transported to a small town in Maine where they meet a emotionally and physically abused girl named Carrie White. However, this is no ordinary girl because Carrie possesses incredible telekinetic powers
Hope is a very powerful word... that ounce of treasure within ourselves to hold to even when the fear and paranoia hangs loosely in the air, when the uncertainty plagues us from pursuing what makes each of us happy (Or 'can' make us happy). Despite the fact of knowing that Eden's Gate plans to make their move during the night of the prom, to use Carrie's power the same way she did on those unwilling cultists who volunteered for those experiments, the girls and Spike 'know' that Carrie won't be easily persuaded not to attend the prom even if she didn't plan to go in the first place. But still, seeing as how Derick Collins 'actually' wants to help the group (Even burning his own bible to prove it) the best they could do is have him ask Carrie to prom (Instead of Tommy like in the original) on one to avoid suspicion from the cult as to 'why' Carrie isn't going... and the other because Collins cares about Carrie and wants to give her the best night ever.
Of course, Carrie being so used to getting hurt does not initially say 'yes' right away. Fearing that this is just another childish prank, a reason to strike her down at her most vulnerable. But after some encouragement from Miss Desjardin and insistence from Collins (Even risking exposing himself on the Whites' doorstep) eventually Carrie does say finally agree to it. Only for everyone, that may indeed be the worst decision they've ever made. For Chris, so determined to exact revenge, wants to hurt Carrie so badly that she'll do 'anything' to get even with her. Even if she has to take 'very' drastic measures at the cost of her own humanity.
11118029 We got a new chapter just posted this morning Doc. You can feel free to start 'before' your shift and do what you can during your half hour lunch and after work. Please take all the time you need.
They actually want to use Carrie to make some sorta "great collapse" apocalypse happen,...in the supposed and prophesied name of God?! You know, i have had my fair share of cults from Chucky to the Ocean Chimps to even the mummies from DuckTales 2017,...But Eden's Gate!? Now this one is just pure psychotic evil!!!!
Just as bad as Dickless Terence did with semi innocent Tom and Jerry.
11118035 Me: Oh thank god! Hungry: Thank,…thank you, lord author!
11118057 NOPE! 11118137 and cataclysmic for the whole town and quite possibly this universe!
11118137 And odds are those plans are not going to be good. Of course, they all go to demonstrate that Joseph Seed is not what he claims to be. He'd trick Carrie into thinking she was special, that she has a place amongst his 'family' so to speak. But the fact is he's just 'using' her new powers to spread chaos and fear. To give the town a scapegoat, someone to demonize for all the losses that are bound to happen. And very few survivors, if any at all, will have much to say otherwise.
oh dear, the beginning of the end with Chris and the cult uniting, something tells me the plan of theirs is gonna end up backfiring harshly, cant wait to see what's in store next chapter, wonderful chapter as always
Wasn't easy but Derick managed to get a yes out of Carrie to go to Prom. But now the whole plot comes into clear. Using Carrie to unleash hell at prom, and now Chris has become part of it. The Girls and Spike best be ready because when Prom comes things will get really messy
11118248 It could backfire drastically. As least for several individuals involved in what's still to come. It's like poking the bear one too many times and finally the bear won't stand to be assaulted anymore.
11118270 A bit of a hasty yes... but Derick did finally manage to convince Carrie to go with him. He hopes to give Carrie the best night ever, course that depends if he was aware of the cult's plan or not. But the cult, on the other hand, they are definitely taking the extra measures to ensure that Carrie has no reason to think she belongs anywhere other than with Eden's Gate.
Interesting. Taking Sue and Tommy's date idea out of the picture definitely changes things. Though even with that change, best not mark anyone as "safe" yet. Hell, with Eden's Gate involved, the carnage could be even worse than the original.
11118285 It's a slightly subtle change, this we were well aware of. But Mr. Enigma insured to me personally that he's been planning this out for a while. He doesn't just want to do a shot-by-shot story with this project, he's aiming for a slightly different direction while still keeping true to the original story... or at least close enough.
On the subject of "a world with no joy" I can imagine there's some complicated Stephen King/DarkTower mythos there, but I'm a fledling on that so I couldn't even begin to know the first thing bout that. So seeing that Joseph's of course two-faced enough to use his own followers and have to kind of wonder how legit Derrick is.
The Mane 6 and Spike have seen a preview of what a Carrie is capable of doing with her powers when "she stops being herself", (and they don't know which is more terrifying, if Joseph, the ghost of Bathsheba Sherman or the video. But if they don't do something, what we've seen is going to repeat itself. Bad time for Carrie to start controlling her powers (and Margaret seems to suspect something). Here we see that it is Derick, and not Tommy, who invites Carrie to the dance. It's good to see that he's on the side of Twilight and the others now, and not The Eden's Gate. We also see how Desjardin proves to be a true mother figure to Carrie; I like this character even more now. Unfortunately, they aren't the only ones forming alliances. Joseph is willing to do whatever it takes to make Carrie explode; and Chris wants to make Carrie suffer whatever it takes. Girls, and Spike, I hope you guys are ready.
Night fell. The mists were flooding the surrounding woodlands, as if they were waters of a storm.
For awhile now, the forest grounds reek of death. Bones littered across the grounds. The smell of blood is still fresh. The sounds of predators gnawing and ripping into their kills rang in the air. They had come to dine. The smell of blood draws them to this small town. Soon, they will have all the meat they can eat. Yet still, they can never have their fill.
Later that same evening, at the Snell household, the Mane and Spike were hanging out with Sue in her room. As they told her what happened at the compound, the whole time Sue listened to recount they heard, and tears eventually streamed from her eyes. A deep sadness resonated within her heart. To think someone would willingly murder their own child over some twisted sense of righteousness. It sickened her, made her feel absolutely terrible even. Sue herself hoped she’d have children of her own someday and just knowing someone could do something like that, it tore her apart. Finally, by the time the group finished explained, they just sat there in utter silence for the longest time.
“… I don’t even know what to say,” Sue finally spoke up.
“It feels like all the joy had been completely sucked out of the world,” Twilight replied sadly.
“What kind of monster does such a thing?” Rarity asked tearfully. “To their own child nonetheless?”
Anakin Skywalker: "...To think, I was that close..."
Princess Luna: "Luke forgave you, Ani."
Storm Shield: "Yeah. I forgave you."
Anakin Skywalker: "Doesn't take away the shame of the horrors I inflicted, upon my own kin."
General Supernova: (To Anakin Skywalker) "Hey, if it's any consolation, Mr. Skywalker. I'm sure a lot of children would prefer you, over that scoundrel, Joseph Seed..."
Future G5
Zipp Storm: "That guy is just sick!"
Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie said absolutely nothing, as they both held each other and sobbed quietly in silence. The story they’ve been told was absolutely terrifying and heartbreaking, neither of them could find it in themselves to speak. Fluttershy was a complete emotional wreck, while Pinkie was so sad her hair lost its bounce and hung flat behind her.
Especially hurtful given that Pinkie Pie herself has a child of her own.
Lil'Cheese immediately bawls his eyes out, upon seeing his mother losing her colors and the bounce in her hair. Cheese Sandwich tries to comfort his baby boy, but it was futile for him to comfort his son, when his beloved wife has lost her luster and color.
And they're not the only one...
Silverstream: (Crying) "Gallus! Hold me!"
Gallus: (Crying) "I AM!"
Princess Celestia: (Crying) "Stormie!" (Hugs her son...or suffocating him)
Audience: "WAAAAAAHHHH!!!"
Equestria Girls
The Rainbooms and friends, including Tom and Jerry, all cried in tears upon seeing Pinkie Pie's lost of color. Though, the Looney Tunes were more disgusted.
Looney Tunes: (Cringing) "Blech!"
Bugs Bunny: (Points at Pinkie Pie)" That is not a good color for her..."
Galaxy
Petro and his friends were crying their eyes out, at the sight of Pinkie Pie's lost of color. Petro then produced a handkerchief for his Wookie-Jedi friend, Gungi, to blow his nose out. After Gungi was done, he handed the drenched handkerchief to the young Jedi.
Petro: (Disgusted) "Uh...you can keep it..."
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: (Crying) "Sunny!" (Hugs her earth pony-turned-alicorn friend)
“Sorry guys, but after all this information I’d really want to be alone right now,” Sue spoke regretfully.
“Try to get some rest dear,” Rarity suggested. “Maybe think of better things tomorrow.”
Me: "Don't jinx it, Rarity..."
The Mane Six and Spike got up, departing the room while waving a sad goodnight to Sue as the door closed behind them. They proceeded toward one of the guest rooms and shut the door. Eventually everyone sat on the ground, their sadness resumed.
“What do we do now?” Spike asked.
“We must protect Carrie at all costs,” Rainbow responded. “That’s what we have to do.”
“And how do ya reckon we do that hon?” Applejack shot back. “We ain’t got no clue how tah even get started. Even when we get some ideas, that there cult’s one step ahead ah us.”
Big Mac: "Eeyup."
Moon Dancer: "They're smarter than they look!"
Marian: "They're gonna have to do some thinking outside the box, on this one..."
Twilight stood to her feet, proceeding to pace around the room as she tried brainstorming other possible ideas that could help Carrie. Suddenly, Pinkie Pie remembered something she found back at the camp and instantly stopped crying.
“Wait a minute!” She said quickly. “I remember something when we were running out of the compound.”
Everyone immediately turned their attention toward Pinkie.
All Theaters
Audience: "Hmmmm?"
Porky Pig: "You have a pl-pl-pl-a plan, Pinkie?"
EQG Pinkie Pie: "Yeah! Of course I always have a plan."
“What is it Pinkie?” Twilight asked.
Pinkie reached into her hair and pulled out a large schematic folded up as well as a video camera. She laid them out in front of everyone, who looked at them in confusion.
Galaxy
SF-R3 "Aree": "Incredible! A hidden pouch!"
Sunset Shimmer: (To Aree) "Actually, I call that a pocket dimension."
Future G5
Sheriff Hitch: "How long has she been carrying all that, in her hair?"
Zipp Storm: "I don't know. But I'd like to get the number of her hair stylist..."
“So what exactly do you have here Pinkie?” Rainbow asked.
“I really don’t know what all of this is,” Pinkie admitted. “But I know it must be important. What else would they keep behind a locked door like its some sort of big giant secret?”
Twilight looked toward the schematics laid out in front of them and noticed they looked like the layout of the Ewan High School gym. At the very bottom of the plans, there was a date as well as an event marked on it.
Prom, 2013
“These schematics are showcasing the school gym on Prom night!” Twilight told everyone.
All Theaters
Audience: (gasp) "WHAT?!"
Crazy Steve: "Dun dun duuuuuuuun!"
“Why would the cultists care about the prom?” Fluttershy asked.
“Let’s see what’s on this camera,” Twilight said, grabbing the object.
Flipping the small screen on the camera, Twilight activated the device and played back the tape while the others gathered around her. The tape played back to when Jacob Seed had Carrie held in the basement. The moment Jacob opened the little music box, something strange happened. Carrie started shaking uncontrollably for a while before going limp as Jacob left the room. Next thing they knew, Carrie ripped right out of the chair restraints and held out her arms. A strange energy started flowing throughout the room she was in.
Silverstream: (Gasp) "She's possessed!"
Ocellus: "She's insane!"
Smolder: "She's mad!"
Crazy Steve: "Dun dun duuuuun!"
And then… it began.
Carrie’s eyes turned solid black as a massive scream of pure rage shot throughout the entire room and sent all the cultists in the room flying.
Princess Luna: "That's it! THAT'S WHAT I FELT IN MY NIGHTMARE! IT'S COMING TRUE!!!"
Crazy Steve: "Dun dun duuuuuuuun!"
Anakin Skywalker: (Annoyed. To Crazy Steve) "Will you stop that?"
Supernova Zap: (Covers Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom's eyes) "Don't look children!"
Galaxy
Sunset Shimmer: "Oh..."
Galen Marek: "My..."
Ben Solo: "Disney!"
Future G5
Sunny Starscout: "I think I'm gonna be sick..."
She then shot her arms out and lifted the projector in a telekinetic grip before reducing it to pieces. She grabbed a number of screaming cultists in her grip before smashing them to a bloody pulp against the solid steel walls of the basement. It was about that time the camera went to static and cut off, leaving the Mane Six and Spike staring wide-eyed, and their mouths dropped over what they just witnessed.
“Oh… my… Faust!” They all gasped.
Me: (Giving into my fears) "We're dead! So very, very, very dead."
Equestria Girls
Porky Pig: "Oh d-d-d-d-dear!"
Future G5
Deputy Sprout: (Hyperventilating) "WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE!!!!" (Runs around in circles, before he knocks himself out, in a door)
Sheriff Hitch: (To Sprout) "Keep it together, man!"
Carrie sat on her bed, closing on of the books she got from the library. Several laid on her bed, one sat on the table at the other side of the room. Carrie decided to test her new powers. Staring at the book on the table, it started to shake and eventually it levitated as the lights flickered. Deep in her focus, she hovered the book towards her. With a wave of her hand, the books on her bed started levitating. They floated around the room like a small flock of birds much to Carrie’s amazement. A few books slammed into the wall or dropped from her telekinetic grasp.
Moon Dancer: "She's getting good!"
Starlight Glimmer: "She's a natural!"
Anakin Skywalker: "Impressive! Most impressive."
Me: "It's like Brainwave secretly has a daughter, and Brainwave Jr. having a secret twin sister, or something..."
Downstairs in the kitchen, Margaret heard the books thumping and saw the lights flickered. She looked up, scared as the house groaned from the energy.
“Carrie?” Margaret called out.
Equestria Girls
Tom: (Fluttershy's P.O.V.) "Uh oh."
Jerry: (Fluttershy's P.O.V.) "Don't look now! Here comes the dragon lady!"
Back in her room, Carrie was astonished as she rose her bed off the floor as well. Margaret turned back toward the sink and pulled a large kitchen knife from the dishwater.
Crazy Steve: "A knife! SHE'S GOT A KNIFE!!!"
Smolder: (To Crazy Steve) "We're not blind. We know what it is..."
She cautiously made her way up the stairs with the knife.
Equestria Girls
Sci-Fi Twi: "Carrie! Look out!"
In her room, Carrie smiled and laughed a tad as she started getting the hang of controlling the levitation.
Pipsqueak: "She can fly!"
Equestria Girls
EQG CMCs, Snips, and Snails: "She can fly?"
Galaxy
Ben Solo: "She can fly?"
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: "She can float!"
Suddenly, Margaret grabbed the door handle and tried opening it.
“Carrie?”
Carrie heard her mother, and the fear broke her concentration. The books fell and the bed returned to its spot on the floor. Margaret opened the door, finding all the lights off and Carrie curled up in bed, pretending to be asleep. Margaret looked around, deciding there’s no danger, and very quietly she put the knife on the dresser.
All Theaters
Audience: "Phew..."
Margaret pulled the blanket over Carrie, stroking her shoulder.
“I’m not going to let anyone hurt you, little girl,” Margaret whispered, to her ‘sleeping’ daughter. “You’re safe here with me.”
Galaxy
Sunset Shimmer: "Safe with you?!" (Scoffs) "I don't know what's unbearable to watch? Your abuse towards Carrie, or your twisted ideals about love and religion..."
Equestria Girls
Tom: (Fluttershy's P.O.V.) "Not going to let anyone hurt your daughter? But who's not going to let you hurt her?"
Carrie’s face was hidden and judging by her eyes she didn’t believe her own mother. Carrie flicked her fingers, and the knife fell off the dresser landing with its blade stuck on the floor with a loud *CLANG!*. Margaret turned around and gasped with fright, while Carrie just smirked.
Trixie: "Now that's an attitude!"
The next day at school, Sue watched Tommy and the rest of the team playing Lacrosse. The Mane Six and Spike stood beside her, all having huge bags under their eyes.
Equestria Girls
Bugs Bunny: "No wonder you goils needed your beauty sleep..."
EQG Rarity: (Scowling towards Bugs) "You wouldn't look so well if you're as cranky and grumpy..."
They were unable to get much sleep from the night before. After seeing what they’d seen on that video camera, to say they were horrified would be an understatement. They decided against telling Sue for the moment, speaking in a hushed tone around her because they really didn’t want her to worry.
“Now we don’t know Carrie very well girls,” Fluttershy whispered. “But after what we saw on that camera last night… that wasn’t her at all… *SQUEEK!*
“She had to have been brainwashed somehow,” Twilight surmised. “Possibly some form of mind control.”
“You mean like the time Plankton had everyone in Bikini Bottom under his mind control?” Pinkie asked.
“Exactly!” Twilight nodded.
Apple Bloom: "And right after that, we saved the day. Didn't we gals?"
Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo: "Yeah!"
Equestria Girls
Porky Pig: "Bi-B-B-B-B-Bikini B-B-B-Bottom?"
Vignette Valencia: "Uh...I'm sorry. Did someone lose a bikini bottom?"
Juniper Montage: "Actually, I think they were referring to Spongebob Squarepants."
Sunny Flare: "Oh! Few. That makes a lot of us ladies feel comfortable..."
Sugarcoat: "In an awkward way..."
Galaxy
Galen Marek: "Bikini Bottom?" (Gets electrocuted by an annoyed Sunset Shimmer)
Sunset Shimmer: (Shaking her head) "Boys..."
Ahsoka Tano: (Shaking her head in agreement) "No control..." (The rest of the girls in the room agree)
“If what you say is true darling, based on the schematics of the school gymnasium, I think we know what Eden’s Gate are planning,” Rarity pointed out.
“Those sick creeps are going to make Carrie go crazy at prom and kill everyone attending,” Rainbow added.
“They do that, and it’ll cause a mass panic,” Applejack spoke up. “It’ll be the end of the world as we know it. Just as Joseph done said.”
Princess Luna: "And a possible dark future I had foreseen..."
Me: "And the remake and repeat of my childhood trauma..."
“This must’ve been his plan all along!” Spike realized.
“Should we tell Carrie about this?” Fluttershy asked.
“Even if we did, she’d never believe us,” Twilight shook her head. “She’s too far brainwashed by the cult that she believes they can’t do no wrong. We’re going to have to take matters into our own hands.”
“And how do we do that?” Pinkie asked.
“We’re going to that prom and we’re going to stop whatever plans the cult has in store. We must do whatever it takes to prevent Carrie from losing control. But for now, we just play along and act like everything’s normal. We can’t risk tipping off the cult that we know what ‘they’ know.”
Starlight Glimmer: "Easier said than done..."
Marian: "Can they really pull it off?"
Moon Dancer: "Knowing Twilight. Sure! Of course! Though...if I have to be honest, I don't know."
Lemon Heart: "Then what should we do Moon Dancer?"
Moon Dancer: "Hope for a miracle. That's the best I could think of..."
Soon as the game ended, Sue went to meet with Tommy as he took off his mask. He ran toward Sue and kissed her on the lips.
“Hey!” Tommy greeted. “How’re you doing?”
“Good…” Sue laughed.
“Good?”
“Yeah…”
“What’s up?”
“I want you take Carrie White to prom.”
“A-ha-ha!” Tommy chuckled. “Good one, babe. Come on.”
Tommy turned to walk away, but Sue didn’t follow. It was then he realized she meant it.
“Are you serious?” Tommy asked, surprised.
Me: "She's dead serious..."
Big Mac: "Eeyup."
Equestria Girls
Daffy Duck: "Sthay what?!"
Future G5
Mane Five: "What the what?!"
“I’m just trying to fix what I did,” Sue insisted.
“Yeah. I-I-I get that, but this is…” Tommy stammered. “Uh, Sue, it’s nuts.”
“Okay, so it’s nuts. But after what we did to her, I have to do something. I have to do something that counts.”
“Uh… what even makes you think that she would say yes to me?” Tommy chuckled nervously.
“She’d say yes,” Sue reassured.
Big Mac: "Nope."
Equestria Girls
Sugarcoat: "No offense, Sue. But you're a little late for that."
Lemon Zest: "Yeah! For one...Carrie's already got her heart won over by another dude!"
Suffice to say, Tommy was still uncertain about this. Sue looked wistful but still she was determined to do the right thing.
“We’ve barely even spoken.”
“What girl doesn’t even want to go to prom? What girl doesn’t want one magical night? Maybe I can give that up for her.”
“No…” Tommy shook his head. “Babe, I want you to have that magic night. I don’t want to go to prom with Carrie White. I want to go to prom with you.”
“Well thankfully, you won’t have to worry about that.”
They both turned toward the direction where the voice came from. Sure enough, Derick Collins approached them.
Equestria Girls
Bugs Bunny: "Ooh! Here comes her Knight-in-Shining-Armor."
Daffy Duck: "Lemme guess. St. George?"
“I’m asking Carrie to prom,” He told them. “We’ve been hanging out as of late and, if I’m being honest, I actually really like her. I’ll ask her to prom and you two can go together. It’s a win-win.”
“I did catch how she looked at you in class when you rescued her,” Sue recalled.
“Well there you go, problem solved!” Tommy smiled at Sue.
Me: "Yeah...problem...solved..."(Gulping in fear) "Not..."
Princess Luna: (To Tommy) "Forgive me if I withheld my enthusiasm..."
Tommy raced back to the field to continue the game. Sue merely shook her head before walking off. Derick was just about to do the same before Twilight and the others approached from the front.
“Derick, wait!” Twilight spoke urgently. “Before you do anything, we know your loyalties lie with Eden’s Gate. But you have to know…”
“My loyalties don’t lie with that brainwashed cult,” Derick interrupted. “At least… not anymore.”
This caused the group to dawn some confusion.
“But I thought you were part of the group,” Spike spoke confused.
“I was… till I heard what happened.”
“You heard all that?” Fluttershy asked.
Derick nodded his head before hanging it in sadness.
“All my life, I thought what the cult was doing was just. I thought the Father was our savior, our guiding light towards the promised land. But after hearing what twisted, demented sense of God he had, after what he’d done to his own child, I refuse to follow anything like that again. I follow the will of God, and I know God would never allow anything like what Joseph Seed has done.”
Capper Dapperpaw: "Those are some big words, coming from you cult boy..."
The group looked toward each other for a few moments, then back toward Derick. They wanted to believe what he was saying, but after being part of the cult for so long they had serious doubts.
“How do we know that what you’re saying is true?” Twilight asked.
Derick took off his backpack and pulled out his Eden’s Gate bible from inside. Walking toward a nearby trash bin, he produced a lighter from his jacket pocket and lit the bible on fire before tossing it toward the bin. Everyone watched with wide eyes as he was essentially throwing away the very teachings he grew up with his entire life.
Me: "Atta boy, Derick!" (Whispering to Mina) "I think he and Michael Lane can get along."
Equestria Girls
Flash Sentry: (Smiling) "He's my kind of guy!"
Bugs Bunny: (Munching on his carrot) "Ditto."
Galaxy
Galen Marek: "Sounds to me, someone is coming to his senses."
Future G5
Sheriff Hitch: "Here here!"
Walking back toward them, a determined look filled his eyes.
“If you guys are protecting Carrie from these assholes, count me in!” He volunteered.
“Ya really care about her don’t ya?” Applejack asked.
“Yeah, I do!” Derick nodded.
Twilight gazed toward Derick for a few moments more, trying to determine whether or not to actually trust him. Then she finally stuck out her hand, to which Derick gently grabbed and shook. From that moment on, their commitment to helping one another was sealed.
“Well, since you’ve already planned to ask Carrie to prom, that’s all we really need you to do,” Twilight responded.
“Right! Take her to prom and make sure she has the greatest night of her life,” Rainbow added.
“The happier she is, the less likely things will go wrong,” Applejack nodded.
Fluttershy soon approached Derick, much to his confusion, and gave him a big hug. He stood there frozen for a moment before awkwardly placing a hand on her back.
“Please make sure Carrie has a good time,” She pleaded. “She’s been through so much already, and I really want her to have a good night for a change. She’s my friend, and friends always want to see each other happy.”
Derick lightly patted Fluttershy’s back before the girl finally drew away to looked toward the pink-haired teen’s eyes with a smile.
“I promise…” He said.
Equestria Girls
Wallflower Blush: "First thing's first. He's gotta ask the girl."
Bugs Bunny: (Munching on his carrot) "Ee...yup."
Later…
Derick Collins walked like the world was in slow motion, treading across the school like a model on a runway. With his slick hair, the hypnotizing eyes, and even a leather jacket, all the girls smiled and giggled toward him. He’d exchange a few handshakes and some high fives to some students and faculty alike. He’s every bit of the embodiment of every teenage heartthrob cliché.
Snips: "Show off."
Equestria Girls
Daffy Duck: "Oh brother."
Future G5
Deputy Sprout: "Ugh. Tell me. What is it that he has that I do not?"
Walking straight into the lunchroom, it didn’t take long for the young man to spot Carrie White. She sat alone, hunched over her telekinesis books. He soon approached her with a tray of food and tapped her shoulder.
“Hey, Carrie!” Derick greeted.
Carrie gasped in surprise over someone talking to her. On instinct, she quickly covered the book as he sat down. She turned toward him and sighed with relief.
“Hey… you…” Carrie greeted awkwardly.
“I was just looking for you at the library, since that became your new hangout and stuff,” Derick spoke. “But I never would’ve figured you’d be here.”
“Yeah… sorry if that’s weird…” Carrie apologized.
“It’s cool…”
For a moment, Carrie said no more. She seemed to be waiting for another mean comment. Derick picked up one of her books and read the title.
“’Telekinesis: Unlocking the mind’,” Derick read. “You certainly have taste.”
Equestria Girls
Rainbooms, Shadowbolts, and Flash Sentry: (Looking at Sci-Fi Twi) "Hmmmmm~" 😏
Skeksil: "Hmmmmm~" 😏
Looney Tunes, Tom and Jerry: (Looking at Sci-Fi Twi) "Hmmmm~" 😏
Sci-FI Twi: "...What?"
Carrie quickly grabbed the book away as he chuckled. A few other students took notice of Derick sitting right across from Carrie, all of them murmuring as to why this random guy would suddenly be hanging with the outcast.
“So, this whole… telekinesis thing. Is that like—some form of, um… hypnosis?” Derick asked, starting conversation. “My choir friends and I tried that once… we actually hypnotized Charlie’s dog to take a dump on Principal Morton’s porch.”
Daffy Duck: "This'th...This'th guy isth for real?"
Sunset Shimmer: "I don't think Carrie's big on...potty humor..."
Seeing as being lighthearted wasn’t reaching Carrie, he decided to switch tactics.
“So… how are you doing?” Derick asked casually.
“I’m… okay…” Carrie answered, awkwardly.
“Great. So you know prom’s next week, right? At first I was just going to skip the whole thing. But then I was thinking… if you don’t have a date already, maybe you’d want to go with me?”
Carrie looked toward Derick in utter confusion. True, she really liked this boy, and they were very good friends. But she couldn’t help but shake her head, thinking she heard him wrong.
“What?”
“You know? The prom?” Derick repeated. “You and me… next week… do some dancing?”
Now Carrie clearly had no idea how to respond. She looked around, seeing all the other students staring at the pair in disbelief. And Carrie could swear she heard a chuckle somewhere in the crowd. In her mind she must be thinking it’s another joke, as Derick leaned toward her.
“What do you say Carrie?”
Carrie stood up and quickly threw her books in her bag hurrying out of the lunchroom.
Rumble: "Uh oh. Rejection..."
Snips: "Story of our life..."
Equestria Girls
Porky Pig: "Oh well. He asked."
Bugs Bunny: "But he ain't taking no for an answer..."
Derick went after her in the hallway and reached for her arm. She whirled out of his grasp, frightfully upset.
“Derick, please stop!” Carrie begged. “Just stop trying to trick me… just like everyone else!”
At first Derick didn’t say a word. He could clearly see how vulnerable and used to being hurt Carrie was.
“Carrie… I’m not trying to trick you,” Derick assured. “I really want to go to prom with you; I refuse to go with anyone else.”
“You don’t mean that…” Carrie whimpered.
“Yes I do!” Derick insisted, holding her coat. “I’m with you Carrie White, every step of the way. Not because someone told me to… not because I have to… I want to go with you. It’ll be the most fun you’ve had in years, I promise!”
“B-B-But…”
“Please…?”
Carrie stared toward Derick for a moment, the way he looked at her as if beckoning to take his hand and say ‘yes’. Instead, as she reached out toward him, she merely grabbed her coat back.
Flurry Heart: "Hmmm. She's playing hard to get. Isn't she mom?"
“I just can’t!” Carrie insisted, shaking her head.
Sweetie Belle: "OH COME OOOOOOOONNNN!!!!"
Crazy Steve: "DARN IT!!!"
And just like that, Carrie took off before Derick could reach out to her. So confused, so upset, she couldn’t even look back toward Derick as she ran as far as her legs could carry himher. And Derick just looked after her, his eyes wanting to help but not knowing what to do. Around the corner, Twilight and her friends approached and stood behind Derick. The young man let out a sigh, as Fluttershy placed a gentle hand on his shoulder.
“I’m sorry…” Fluttershy apologized.
Derick didn’t say another word. Instead he slowly turned toward Fluttershy and pat his hand against hers. He then decided to walk away, his hands in his pocket wondering what he was going to do now. The very same question plaguing the minds of the girls, and Spike. What were they going to do?
Me: "Well, I'll tell you what I'm going to do. I’m gettin’ outta here!” (Runs away)
Discord: "WHAT THE–There he goes again... Movie staffs! We have a runaway doctor! Spread out, and find him! He couldn't have gone far."
11118845 Phantom, please don't do that, if you don't mind my saying so. You see, you have a very loud thumb. *looks into your eyes* Hypnotism can rid you of your psychosis-sis... so... easily.
Mina: "Haven't seen a hair, nor hide of him. I think we're just gonna have to continue the commentary without him..."
In the darkened girls’ locker room, Carrie sat while crying her eyes out. It didn’t take long for Miss Desjardin to find her all by herself. Feeling sympathetic for the child, she knelt down to speak to her.
“Did one of the girls try something again?” She asked worriedly.
Carrie shook her head before gazing up toward her teacher with tears in her eyes.
“No… I got invited to prom.”
Hearing the amazing news, Miss Desjardin was ecstatic for Carrie.
“Really?” She gasped. “That’s great news! With whom?”
“Derick Collins,” Carrie responded.
Miss Desjardin tried to retain the happy façade, but the answer set off a red flag.
“Derick Collins?” Miss Desjardin asked. “I don’t think I’ve seen him around school very much. Is he… dreamy?”
Carrie sniffled a bit before her nodding her head ‘yes’.
Discord: "You could say, he's a real heart throbber."
Equestria Girls
Bugs Bunny: "Her Knight-In-Shining Armor."
Tom: "Meow meow meow!" (Fluttershy's P.O.V.) "The salt to her pepper!"
Jerry: (Fluttershy's P.O.V.) "Her cheese to her macaroni!"
Daffy Duck: "The sizzle to her wizzle! HOT-SSSSS!!!"
Bugs Bunny: (To Daffy) "Eh, that's going too far, Daff."
Galaxy
Sunset Shimmer: (Sighs) "L'amour..."
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: "Her dreamboat~"
“Yeah…” She replied. “I don’t know why he’d ever want to go with me though. He must have just been out of options.”
Future G5
Zipp Storm: "That's not true! You're going about it the wrong way!"
Pipp Petals: "Mi mi mi~"
Suffice to say, Carrie was convinced it couldn’t possibly be true. Despite being everything a girl could dream of Collins really only spoke with one girl… and that was her. Part of her desperately wanted to believe Derick was being genuine but was so afraid she’d just get her heart broken again. Poor Miss Desjardin couldn’t bring herself to crush her hopes, even against her better judgement.
“Maybe he really meant it,” She assured.
“No…”
“Yes, of course he did.”
“Why?” Carrie sobbed. “Why would he want to go with me?”
“Come here.”
Little Chipmunk Girl: "She's not going to slap Carrie across the face again. Is she?"
Miss Desjardin took Carrie’s hand and lead her toward the mirrors. She put her arms over Carrie’s shoulders for support.
“Do you know what I see?” She asked. “I see a beautiful young woman. Maybe wear a little make-up.”
Carrie gazes upon her reflection, daring for a moment to hope. Miss Desjardin pulled her hair back and poked Carrie’s cheek, getting a smile from the girl.
“Pinch your cheeks a little bit, put some color in there. Curl your hair. Stand up straight.”
Miss Desjardin gently pulled Carrie from her usual crouched posture.
“There you go.”
And as Carrie looked upon her reflection, she began to see someone worthwhile looking back. The woman she wanted to be.
Me: "OH MY DISNEY! NOOOOOOOOO!!!!" (I'm drawn to another Disney reference)
Extra Cut
Reflection – Mulan
Carrie: (Singing) Look at me You may think you see Who I really am But you'll never know me
Every day It's as if I play a part Now I see If I wear a mask I can fool the world But I cannot fool my heart
Who is that girl I see Staring straight back at me? When will my reflection show Who I am inside?
I am now In a world where I Have to hide my heart And what I believe in
But somehow I will show the world What's inside my heart And be loved for who I am
Who is that girl I see Staring straight back at me? Why is my reflection Someone I don't know? Must I pretend that I'm Someone else for all time? When will my reflection show Who I am inside?
There's a heart that must be Free to fly That burns with a need to know The reason why
Why must we all conceal What we think, how we feel? Must there be a secret me I'm forced to hide? I won't pretend that I'm Someone else for all time When will my reflection show Who I am inside?
When will my reflection show Who I am inside? Inside Who I am inside
Me: "ARRRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!! RRRRR-RRRRR-RRRRR-RRRRRRR... WHA-WHA-WHA-WHA-WHA-WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY?!!! IT BUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRNNNNNNSSSSSSSS!!!! WHY WORLD?! WHY WORLD?!!! WHAT A WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORLD!!!! Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo......"
Me: "What just happened? I blacked out there for a second..."
Later that day, Carrie walked along the street toward her house. Suddenly, to her horror, she spotted Derick pulling up his car along the driveway. Soon as he emerged, he began walking straight towards her house.
Flurry Heart: "He's not going to give up. Is he?"
Quickly, she raced after him.
“What are you doing here?!” She asked horrified.
“Aren’t you going to ask me in?” He joked.
“This is not a joking matter. You can’t be here!”
“Why shouldn’t I? I hoped to continue our conversation from earlier. About the prom. Kind of left me hanging back there.”
“I’ve already told you…”
“You did, but I figured you’d change your mind.”
Carrie watch a car come down the road, making sure it’s not her mother. All the while Derick kept talking.
“Girls change their mind all the time.”
All Theaters
Female Audience: "Hmph!"
Male Audience: (Getting mischievous ideas) "Hmmm."
“Why are you doing this?” Carrie asked him seriously.
“C’mon, I’m really trying!” Derick insisted.
“Who’s been telling you to try?! Did Twilight and her friends put you up to this? Eden’s Gate?”
“Nobody told me to do anything… I chose to approach you! And I meant every word I said.”
Derick looked deeply into her eyes, placing a gently hand upon her cheek. Carrie flinched a bit, and yet somehow she didn’t mind.
“I’m not an idiot… I know what its like to be the outcast,” Derick responded. “For years, my entire life has always been with Eden’s Gate, we’re always praying every day and I never really get to do regular teenage activities. You and I have gone to the same place for religious fulfillment but never once had we even spoken to each other. Then I actually get a chance to meet you, to get to know you not as a follower of God… but as a person.
“I realized that the only fulfillment I haven’t had was someone special to call my own. I get you don’t think very highly of yourself, but believe me when I say… I think you’re the most beautiful, kindest girl on the face of God’s green earth. And I’d give up ‘all’ of my beliefs, if it means getting to know the ‘real’ you.”
All Theaters
Children: "Ooh!"
Carrie almost wanted to cry over such kind words, she desperately wanted to believe them truly. She just didn’t know if she could find it in her heart to believe him.
"You need to leave,” She insisted.
“Not until you say yes,” He responded. “Just one night being regular kids and I’ll never ask again.”
“Why is the prom so important to you?”
“Because I think we’d have a good time. Truth is… I’ve been to so many schools, yet I never actually been to a dance. Honestly, I really believe if you’d give it a chance as I’m willing to, maybe you’ll realize your missing something in your life too. And even if nothing happens afterwards and we still want to be friends, I’ll have no regrets.”
Carrie spotted another car, fearing that it could be her onemom. And even if that wasn’t the case, surely the next car would be.
“Yes!” She spoke quickly. “Yes, okay, I’ll go. I gotta be back by 10:30.”
Even though it was a rather ‘quick’ yes, just to convince him to leave before her mother arrives, Derick was still pleased she agreed.
“No problem! So… I’ll pick you up here at 7:00?”
“Yeah… okay,” Carrie nodded.
Before he left, he decided to be brave and go for the moment. He leaned close and placed a gentle kiss on Carrie’s cheek, smiling at her as he hopped in his car. Carrie stood frozen as a heated blush came to her face as she watched him drive away.
Galaxy
Galen Marek: "Reminds you of someone, Sunset?"
Sunset Shimmer: (Chuckling) "At least I'm bold enough to make the first move, you pussy."
Galen Marek: (Feigning shock) "Me? Pussy? I am offended."
Slowly lifting her hand up, placing it on the exact spot on her where he kissed her, Carrie White couldn’t stop the huge smile coursing its way to her face as she walked back home.
Little did the strawberry blonde know, from the sidelines, Chris Hargensen had been watching the entire time with an angry look on her face.
Sweetie Belle/u]: "Oh no!"
Scootaloo: "Not her!"
She couldn’t believe the little bible thumping freak was now going to prom. A deep rage boiled deep inside her, being kicked out of prom all because of Carrie White. Pulling her hood over her head, Chris walked down the street huffing angrily to herself. She needed to figure out a way to get back at Carrie White, something even more humiliating than last time. But how?
As she walked, the sound of a car behind her caused her to turn around and spot two white vans coming in her direction. Chris quickly stepped out of the way to let them pass, but they pulled alongside to a complete stop next to her. From the vans, a group of Eden’s Gate cultists jumped out with machine guns and started towards her. This scared Chris immensely and she quickly fled the other way. However, she hadn’t gotten very far as another group of cultists jumped out the other van and cut her off. They grabbed her by the arms and started dragging her back towards the others.
“Let me go freaks!” She yelled loudly. “I swear if you don’t let me go, there’ll be Hell to pay! My dad’s a lawyer and he’ll sue your asses off!”
Me: "How did that work out for you, last time, Dalia Hawthorne?"
Mina: "DOC! Where've you been?"
Silver Shill: "We thought you chickened out on us?"
Me: "I may not be perfect, but even I wouldn't want to miss something as big as this..."
Mina: "Well, what do you think is happening to her now?"
The cultists said nothing as they dragged Chris back towards the rest of the group. One of the cultists opened the back doors of the van and out stepped Joseph Seed.
Princess Luna: "Now what is that scoundrel up to?"
The Father gazed toward the girl struggling in the grips of the other cultists and smiled.
“Release her!” He ordered.
The two cultists simply nodded their heads and released their hold on Chris. The girl in question rubbed her sore arms and just glared at the Father.
“If you so much as long one finger on my, my dad will ensure you’re locked away for the rest of you fucking life!” She threatened.
Future G5
Zipp Storm: "Defiant to the end. What a way to go..."
Joseph, meanwhile, chuckled in amusement as he stepped towards the girl.
“Worry not my child, for I am not here to harm you,” He assured her. “Rather in fact, I’m here to offer you aid.”
“Yeah right creep,” Chris scoffed. “If I were you, I’d get in your shitty can and get as far the hell away as possible because I’ll call the cops!”
The cultists behind Chris raised their guns and aimed for her back. But Joseph merely held a hand to stay their fire. He then held both arms to the sky as he looked toward the heavens.
“When the Lamb opened the seventh seal… there was silence in Heaven… and the seven angels before God were given seven trumpets. And there were noises, thundering’s, lightning’s, and an earthquake… and I heard a great voice from the temple say to the angels… go your ways… and pour from the vials, the wartch of God upon the Earth.”
Hearing his preaching, Chris merely rolled her eyes.
“Oh great, another Jesus freak!” She muttered. “Look, I’ve had enough with this shit in my life. You can all go back to singing your little songs and I’m going the hell home! I want nothing to do with ‘any’ of you!”
She pushed the two cultists aside and started walking her way back down the street.
“Not even if it concerns vengeance against Carrie White?”
Chris stopped in her tracks and looked over her shoulder toward the mad preacher and his followers.
“What do you mean?” She asked confused.
“I know you harbor great resentment for Carrie White all your life,” Joseph continued. “God has spoken to me child of a great collapse that will destroy this very world as we know it. We believe young Carrie is the chosen one, who will bring the great collapse upon the Earth. All she needs is to be pushed in that very direction and the prophecy that has been foretold unto me will be fulfilled.”
Chris turned fully back around now. She walked right back into the middle of the group.
“Why the hell should I help you?” Chris retorted. “What kind of church are you?”
“The kind which rewards an opportunity to torment Carrie White with any punishment deem worthy,” Joseph continued. “In order for the prophecy to be fulfilled, she must first be broken beyond repair. I knew you’d never pass on an opportunity to cause that girl pain; I’m offering you that very opportunity. TO help show the world exactly what she is… nothing.”
Joseph held out a hand for her, leaving Chris to ponder for a good moment. It was certainly a very tempting offer. An opportunity to humiliate that stupid little freak even further and show it off to the whole world. An opportunity for revenge knocking right at her front door, and this man offered her that chance to do anything she wished. With a wicked smile on her face, she reached out and shook the preacher’s hand.
I LIIIIIIIIVE!!!
So tell me what chapter needs my commentary big man! You just say the word and I’m there!
Hope is a very powerful word... that ounce of treasure within ourselves to hold to even when the fear and paranoia hangs loosely in the air, when the uncertainty plagues us from pursuing what makes each of us happy (Or 'can' make us happy). Despite the fact of knowing that Eden's Gate plans to make their move during the night of the prom, to use Carrie's power the same way she did on those unwilling cultists who volunteered for those experiments, the girls and Spike 'know' that Carrie won't be easily persuaded not to attend the prom even if she didn't plan to go in the first place. But still, seeing as how Derick Collins 'actually' wants to help the group (Even burning his own bible to prove it) the best they could do is have him ask Carrie to prom (Instead of Tommy like in the original) on one to avoid suspicion from the cult as to 'why' Carrie isn't going... and the other because Collins cares about Carrie and wants to give her the best night ever.
Of course, Carrie being so used to getting hurt does not initially say 'yes' right away. Fearing that this is just another childish prank, a reason to strike her down at her most vulnerable. But after some encouragement from Miss Desjardin and insistence from Collins (Even risking exposing himself on the Whites' doorstep) eventually Carrie does say finally agree to it. Only for everyone, that may indeed be the worst decision they've ever made. For Chris, so determined to exact revenge, wants to hurt Carrie so badly that she'll do 'anything' to get even with her. Even if she has to take 'very' drastic measures at the cost of her own humanity.
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We got a new chapter just posted this morning Doc. You can feel free to start 'before' your shift and do what you can during your half hour lunch and after work. Please take all the time you need.
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Only got four more left before the nightmare is over
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And also include my "friends" in your comments
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Before the dreaded prom
They actually want to use Carrie to make some sorta "great collapse" apocalypse happen,...in the supposed and prophesied name of God?!
You know, i have had my fair share of cults from Chucky to the Ocean Chimps to even the mummies from DuckTales 2017,...But Eden's Gate!?
Now this one is just pure psychotic evil!!!!
Just as bad as Dickless Terence did with semi innocent Tom and Jerry.
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Me: Oh thank god!
Hungry: Thank,…thank you, lord author!
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NOPE!
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and cataclysmic for the whole town and quite possibly this universe!
Oh boy. This won't end well.
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Do you happen to know the next story?
Just so that I could be ready.
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Yeah. And when that comes. It be something they won’t forget and be very VERY bloody.. and that’s putting it lightly
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Nice Mushu reference from Mulan.
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Lucas... are you just telling us what to do?
Need we remind you that Mr. Enigma and I are your 'superiors'. We don't take orders... from fans!
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That's for Mr. Enigma to know, and you to find out. One of the few rules of the site:
Nobody is to know about what the next project is until Mr. Enigma finishes his current project.
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aw, shoot. Sorry, I keep forgetting that.
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It was just an idea...
And the mensage is for Doc
Just when Carrie is beginning to find hope, Joseph has just recruited Chris to do something sinister to Carrie.
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And odds are those plans are not going to be good. Of course, they all go to demonstrate that Joseph Seed is not what he claims to be. He'd trick Carrie into thinking she was special, that she has a place amongst his 'family' so to speak. But the fact is he's just 'using' her new powers to spread chaos and fear. To give the town a scapegoat, someone to demonize for all the losses that are bound to happen. And very few survivors, if any at all, will have much to say otherwise.
In the words of several Star Wars characters: I've got a bad feeling about this.
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Me too...
Teaming with Joseph Gate and the bastards from Eden's Gate?! THIS IS LOW EVEN FOR YOU, CHRIS!!!!![:twilightangry2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightangry2.png)
oh dear, the beginning of the end with Chris and the cult uniting, something tells me the plan of theirs is gonna end up backfiring harshly, cant wait to see what's in store next chapter, wonderful chapter as always![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
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Who wouldn't have a bad feeling after what we've just seen? And the experience will be just as painful as the feeling too.
Wasn't easy but Derick managed to get a yes out of Carrie to go to Prom. But now the whole plot comes into clear. Using Carrie to unleash hell at prom, and now Chris has become part of it. The Girls and Spike best be ready because when Prom comes things will get really messy
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It could backfire drastically. As least for several individuals involved in what's still to come. It's like poking the bear one too many times and finally the bear won't stand to be assaulted anymore.
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A bit of a hasty yes... but Derick did finally manage to convince Carrie to go with him. He hopes to give Carrie the best night ever, course that depends if he was aware of the cult's plan or not. But the cult, on the other hand, they are definitely taking the extra measures to ensure that Carrie has no reason to think she belongs anywhere other than with Eden's Gate.
Interesting. Taking Sue and Tommy's date idea out of the picture definitely changes things. Though even with that change, best not mark anyone as "safe" yet. Hell, with Eden's Gate involved, the carnage could be even worse than the original.
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It's a slightly subtle change, this we were well aware of. But Mr. Enigma insured to me personally that he's been planning this out for a while. He doesn't just want to do a shot-by-shot story with this project, he's aiming for a slightly different direction while still keeping true to the original story... or at least close enough.
On the subject of "a world with no joy" I can imagine there's some complicated Stephen King/DarkTower mythos there, but I'm a fledling on that so I couldn't even begin to know the first thing bout that. So seeing that Joseph's of course two-faced enough to use his own followers and have to kind of wonder how legit Derrick is.
The Mane 6 and Spike have seen a preview of what a Carrie is capable of doing with her powers when "she stops being herself", (and they don't know which is more terrifying, if Joseph, the ghost of Bathsheba Sherman or the video. But if they don't do something, what we've seen is going to repeat itself. Bad time for Carrie to start controlling her powers (and Margaret seems to suspect something).
Here we see that it is Derick, and not Tommy, who invites Carrie to the dance. It's good to see that he's on the side of Twilight and the others now, and not The Eden's Gate. We also see how Desjardin proves to be a true mother figure to Carrie; I like this character even more now.
Unfortunately, they aren't the only ones forming alliances. Joseph is willing to do whatever it takes to make Carrie explode; and Chris wants to make Carrie suffer whatever it takes. Girls, and Spike, I hope you guys are ready.
Meanwhile, back at Discord's Theater(s)
Extra Cut
Night fell. The mists were flooding the surrounding woodlands, as if they were waters of a storm.
For awhile now, the forest grounds reek of death. Bones littered across the grounds. The smell of blood is still fresh. The sounds of predators gnawing and ripping into their kills rang in the air. They had come to dine. The smell of blood draws them to this small town. Soon, they will have all the meat they can eat. Yet still, they can never have their fill.
Anakin Skywalker: "...To think, I was that close..."
Princess Luna: "Luke forgave you, Ani."
Storm Shield: "Yeah. I forgave you."
Anakin Skywalker: "Doesn't take away the shame of the horrors I inflicted, upon my own kin."
General Supernova: (To Anakin Skywalker) "Hey, if it's any consolation, Mr. Skywalker. I'm sure a lot of children would prefer you, over that scoundrel, Joseph Seed..."
Future G5
Zipp Storm: "That guy is just sick!"
Lil'Cheese immediately bawls his eyes out, upon seeing his mother losing her colors and the bounce in her hair. Cheese Sandwich tries to comfort his baby boy, but it was futile for him to comfort his son, when his beloved wife has lost her luster and color.
And they're not the only one...
Silverstream: (Crying) "Gallus! Hold me!"
Gallus: (Crying) "I AM!"
Princess Celestia: (Crying) "Stormie!" (Hugs her son...or suffocating him)
Audience: "WAAAAAAHHHH!!!"
Equestria Girls
The Rainbooms and friends, including Tom and Jerry, all cried in tears upon seeing Pinkie Pie's lost of color. Though, the Looney Tunes were more disgusted.
Looney Tunes: (Cringing) "Blech!"
Bugs Bunny: (Points at Pinkie Pie)" That is not a good color for her..."
Galaxy
Petro and his friends were crying their eyes out, at the sight of Pinkie Pie's lost of color. Petro then produced a handkerchief for his Wookie-Jedi friend, Gungi, to blow his nose out. After Gungi was done, he handed the drenched handkerchief to the young Jedi.
Petro: (Disgusted) "Uh...you can keep it..."
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: (Crying) "Sunny!" (Hugs her earth pony-turned-alicorn friend)
Me: "Don't jinx it, Rarity..."
Big Mac: "Eeyup."
Moon Dancer: "They're smarter than they look!"
Marian: "They're gonna have to do some thinking outside the box, on this one..."
All Theaters
Audience: "Hmmmm?"
Porky Pig: "You have a pl-pl-pl-a plan, Pinkie?"
EQG Pinkie Pie: "Yeah! Of course I always have a plan."
Galaxy
SF-R3 "Aree": "Incredible! A hidden pouch!"
Sunset Shimmer: (To Aree) "Actually, I call that a pocket dimension."
Future G5
Sheriff Hitch: "How long has she been carrying all that, in her hair?"
Zipp Storm: "I don't know. But I'd like to get the number of her hair stylist..."
All Theaters
Audience: (gasp) "WHAT?!"
Crazy Steve: "Dun dun duuuuuuuun!"
Silverstream: (Gasp) "She's possessed!"
Ocellus: "She's insane!"
Smolder: "She's mad!"
Crazy Steve: "Dun dun duuuuun!"
Princess Luna: "That's it! THAT'S WHAT I FELT IN MY NIGHTMARE! IT'S COMING TRUE!!!"
Crazy Steve: "Dun dun duuuuuuuun!"
Anakin Skywalker: (Annoyed. To Crazy Steve) "Will you stop that?"
Crazy Steve: (Dejected) "Wah wah wah waaaaaaaaaaahhh..."
Equestria Girls
EQG Fluttershy: "Oh! Oh dear goodness!"
Supernova Zap: (Covers Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom's eyes) "Don't look children!"
Galaxy
Sunset Shimmer: "Oh..."
Galen Marek: "My..."
Ben Solo: "Disney!"
Future G5
Sunny Starscout: "I think I'm gonna be sick..."
Me: (Giving into my fears) "We're dead! So very, very, very dead."
Equestria Girls
Porky Pig: "Oh d-d-d-d-dear!"
Future G5
Deputy Sprout: (Hyperventilating) "WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE!!!!" (Runs around in circles, before he knocks himself out, in a door)
Sheriff Hitch: (To Sprout) "Keep it together, man!"
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Moon Dancer: "She's getting good!"
Starlight Glimmer: "She's a natural!"
Anakin Skywalker: "Impressive! Most impressive."
Me: "It's like Brainwave secretly has a daughter, and Brainwave Jr. having a secret twin sister, or something..."
Equestria Girls
Tom: (Fluttershy's P.O.V.) "Uh oh."
Jerry: (Fluttershy's P.O.V.) "Don't look now! Here comes the dragon lady!"
Crazy Steve: "A knife! SHE'S GOT A KNIFE!!!"
Smolder: (To Crazy Steve) "We're not blind. We know what it is..."
Equestria Girls
Sci-Fi Twi: "Carrie! Look out!"
Pipsqueak: "She can fly!"
Equestria Girls
EQG CMCs, Snips, and Snails: "She can fly?"
Galaxy
Ben Solo: "She can fly?"
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: "She can float!"
All Theaters
Audience: "Phew..."
Galaxy
Sunset Shimmer: "Safe with you?!" (Scoffs) "I don't know what's unbearable to watch? Your abuse towards Carrie, or your twisted ideals about love and religion..."
Equestria Girls
Tom: (Fluttershy's P.O.V.) "Not going to let anyone hurt your daughter? But who's not going to let you hurt her?"
Trixie: "Now that's an attitude!"
Equestria Girls
Bugs Bunny: "No wonder you goils needed your beauty sleep..."
EQG Rarity: (Scowling towards Bugs) "You wouldn't look so well if you're as cranky and grumpy..."
Apple Bloom: "And right after that, we saved the day. Didn't we gals?"
Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo: "Yeah!"
Equestria Girls
Porky Pig: "Bi-B-B-B-B-Bikini B-B-B-Bottom?"
Vignette Valencia: "Uh...I'm sorry. Did someone lose a bikini bottom?"
Juniper Montage: "Actually, I think they were referring to Spongebob Squarepants."
Sunny Flare: "Oh! Few. That makes a lot of us ladies feel comfortable..."
Sugarcoat: "In an awkward way..."
Galaxy
Galen Marek: "Bikini Bottom?" (Gets electrocuted by an annoyed Sunset Shimmer)
Sunset Shimmer: (Shaking her head) "Boys..."
Ahsoka Tano: (Shaking her head in agreement) "No control..." (The rest of the girls in the room agree)
Princess Luna: "And a possible dark future I had foreseen..."
Me: "And the remake and repeat of my childhood trauma..."
Starlight Glimmer: "Easier said than done..."
Marian: "Can they really pull it off?"
Moon Dancer: "Knowing Twilight. Sure! Of course! Though...if I have to be honest, I don't know."
Lemon Heart: "Then what should we do Moon Dancer?"
Moon Dancer: "Hope for a miracle. That's the best I could think of..."
Galaxy
Ben Solo: "Master?"
Sunset Shimmer: "...Be brave, Ben...for our friends..."
Me: "She's dead serious..."
Big Mac: "Eeyup."
Equestria Girls
Daffy Duck: "Sthay what?!"
Future G5
Mane Five: "What the what?!"
Big Mac: "Nope."
Equestria Girls
Sugarcoat: "No offense, Sue. But you're a little late for that."
Lemon Zest: "Yeah! For one...Carrie's already got her heart won over by another dude!"
Equestria Girls
Bugs Bunny: "Ooh! Here comes her Knight-in-Shining-Armor."
Daffy Duck: "Lemme guess. St. George?"
Me: "Yeah...problem...solved..."(Gulping in fear) "Not..."
Princess Luna: (To Tommy) "Forgive me if I withheld my enthusiasm..."
Capper Dapperpaw: "Those are some big words, coming from you cult boy..."
Me: "Atta boy, Derick!" (Whispering to Mina) "I think he and Michael Lane can get along."
Equestria Girls
Flash Sentry: (Smiling) "He's my kind of guy!"
Bugs Bunny: (Munching on his carrot) "Ditto."
Galaxy
Galen Marek: "Sounds to me, someone is coming to his senses."
Future G5
Sheriff Hitch: "Here here!"
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Equestria Girls
Daffy Duck: "Whoo-hoo! Love conquers all! Whoo hoo! Whoo hoo! Whoo hoo! Whoo hoo!"
Equestria Girls
Wallflower Blush: "First thing's first. He's gotta ask the girl."
Bugs Bunny: (Munching on his carrot) "Ee...yup."
Snips: "Show off."
Equestria Girls
Daffy Duck: "Oh brother."
Future G5
Deputy Sprout: "Ugh. Tell me. What is it that he has that I do not?"
Equestria Girls
Rainbooms, Shadowbolts, and Flash Sentry: (Looking at Sci-Fi Twi) "Hmmmmm~" 😏
Skeksil: "Hmmmmm~" 😏
Looney Tunes, Tom and Jerry: (Looking at Sci-Fi Twi) "Hmmmm~" 😏
Sci-FI Twi: "...What?"
All Theaters
Audience: (Cringing and groaning) "Oh...."
Katherina Proudpaws: "Most of us dogs find that very offensive..."
Daffy Duck: "This'th...This'th guy isth for real?"
Sunset Shimmer: "I don't think Carrie's big on...potty humor..."
Rumble: "Uh oh. Rejection..."
Snips: "Story of our life..."
Equestria Girls
Porky Pig: "Oh well. He asked."
Bugs Bunny: "But he ain't taking no for an answer..."
Flurry Heart: "Hmmm. She's playing hard to get. Isn't she mom?"
Princess Cadence: "I...don't think that's it, sweetie..."
Sweetie Belle: "OH COME OOOOOOOONNNN!!!!"
Crazy Steve: "DARN IT!!!"
Me: "Well, I'll tell you what I'm going to do. I’m gettin’ outta here!” (Runs away)
Discord: "WHAT THE–There he goes again... Movie staffs! We have a runaway doctor! Spread out, and find him! He couldn't have gone far."
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"Oooh mommy!"
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Phantom, please don't do that, if you don't mind my saying so. You see, you have a very loud thumb. *looks into your eyes* Hypnotism can rid you of your psychosis-sis... so... easily.
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Silver Shill: "No luck?"
Mina: "Haven't seen a hair, nor hide of him. I think we're just gonna have to continue the commentary without him..."
Discord: "You could say, he's a real heart throbber."
Equestria Girls
Bugs Bunny: "Her Knight-In-Shining Armor."
Tom: "Meow meow meow!" (Fluttershy's P.O.V.) "The salt to her pepper!"
Jerry: (Fluttershy's P.O.V.) "Her cheese to her macaroni!"
Daffy Duck: "The sizzle to her wizzle! HOT-SSSSS!!!"
Bugs Bunny: (To Daffy) "Eh, that's going too far, Daff."
Galaxy
Sunset Shimmer: (Sighs) "L'amour..."
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: "Her dreamboat~"
Future G5
Zipp Storm: "That's not true! You're going about it the wrong way!"
Pipp Petals: "Mi mi mi~"
Little Chipmunk Girl: "She's not going to slap Carrie across the face again. Is she?"
Me: "OH MY DISNEY! NOOOOOOOOO!!!!" (I'm drawn to another Disney reference)
Extra Cut
Reflection – Mulan
Carrie: (Singing)
Look at me
You may think you see
Who I really am
But you'll never know me
Every day
It's as if I play a part
Now I see
If I wear a mask
I can fool the world
But I cannot fool my heart
Who is that girl I see
Staring straight back at me?
When will my reflection show
Who I am inside?
I am now
In a world where I
Have to hide my heart
And what I believe in
But somehow
I will show the world
What's inside my heart
And be loved for who I am
Who is that girl I see
Staring straight back at me?
Why is my reflection
Someone I don't know?
Must I pretend that I'm
Someone else for all time?
When will my reflection show
Who I am inside?
There's a heart that must be
Free to fly
That burns with a need to know
The reason why
Why must we all conceal
What we think, how we feel?
Must there be a secret me
I'm forced to hide?
I won't pretend that I'm
Someone else for all time
When will my reflection show
Who I am inside?
When will my reflection show
Who I am inside?
Inside
Who I am inside
Me: "ARRRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!! RRRRR-RRRRR-RRRRR-RRRRRRR... WHA-WHA-WHA-WHA-WHA-WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY?!!! IT BUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRNNNNNNSSSSSSSS!!!! WHY WORLD?! WHY WORLD?!!! WHAT A WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORLD!!!! Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo......"
Me: "What just happened? I blacked out there for a second..."
Flurry Heart: "He's not going to give up. Is he?"
All Theaters
Female Audience: "Hmph!"
Male Audience: (Getting mischievous ideas) "Hmmm."
All Theaters
Children: "Ooh!"
Galaxy
Galen Marek: "Reminds you of someone, Sunset?"
Sunset Shimmer: (Chuckling) "At least I'm bold enough to make the first move, you pussy."
Galen Marek: (Feigning shock) "Me? Pussy? I am offended."
Sweetie Belle/u]: "Oh no!"
Scootaloo: "Not her!"
Me: "How did that work out for you, last time, Dalia Hawthorne?"
Mina: "DOC! Where've you been?"
Silver Shill: "We thought you chickened out on us?"
Me: "I may not be perfect, but even I wouldn't want to miss something as big as this..."
Mina: "Well, what do you think is happening to her now?"
Princess Luna: "Now what is that scoundrel up to?"
Future G5
Zipp Storm: "Defiant to the end. What a way to go..."
*Screaming*
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(imitating Baymax) Oh no.
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Ha!! Animaniacs reference.