you might need to fix this “A monster made by anger and the nocturnus clan. Now thanks to you, you awakened me, FULLY.” he said as he grabbed her head and tossed her to the side of the room. She ran out of fear only to be stopped by a quick explosive punch to the gut. he said as he grabbed her head and tossed her to the side of the room. She ran out of fear only to be stopped by a quick explosive punch to the gut, sending her flying across the room. In the distance, there were six mares that looked at the fight in fear. He then grabbed a piece of rubble from the floor, he chucked it at her as she let out a blood curdling scream.
That's Chaos Spear, not Chaos Control Spear.
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I actually made that move out of my mind. he combined Chaos control with chaos spear.
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Oh, nevermind.
I'm interested. I hope this goes in a good direction, it has potential.👍
you might need to fix this
“A monster made by anger and the nocturnus clan. Now thanks to you, you awakened me, FULLY.” he said as he grabbed her head and tossed her to the side of the room. She ran out of fear only to be stopped by a quick explosive punch to the gut. he said as he grabbed her head and tossed her to the side of the room. She ran out of fear only to be stopped by a quick explosive punch to the gut, sending her flying across the room. In the distance, there were six mares that looked at the fight in fear. He then grabbed a piece of rubble from the floor, he chucked it at her as she let out a blood curdling scream.
Story is pretty interesting.
Though.. really not fond of how Nightmare Moon got humiliated badly though...