You were right about this story. If you THINK about it too much, it gets weirrrrrrd. Lulz.
I like that it's... ... ... positive? You went out of your way to establish that this is a *consensual* scenario, and I appreciate that.
So many of my nsfw story attempts get completely hung up on world/lore building. But perhaps that CAN be the crux of it. Refreshing to see another author flex in this way--especially one whom I respect. F'naaaaa.
The key is to recognize that a) your story has to operate on "porn logic," i.e. this is a world where sex can happen between anyone at any time for the flimsiest of reasons and everybody's more or less okay with that, and b) at some point you just have to stop overthinking it and go with whatever feels right.
There's been plenty of comments on this story where people have called out how "unrealistic" it is or pointed out what they think are inconsistencies with the world. My response: It's porn. It's there to titillate and be silly. Chuck Tingle has made a fortune doing things FAR less realistic than what I'm doing here. (Including, might I add, a story where a man has sex with a winged intelligent clone of his own ass).
My advice: Ignore the nitpick brigade, embrace your own madness, and make the sexy stuff you want to see. (But be aware it may not be for everyone.)
Also, try to track down Phil Foglio's Xxxenophile comics. Great inspiration for happy, silly, sexy porn.
I *wish* I could wrap my head around that. It’d certainly help me make saucier oneshots. But I always trip on suspension of disbelief and world-building. F’naaaa.
Twilight's scaroused.
It is a big decision. Giving her all the information first does seem like the wisest course of action. Thank goodness for that convenient Rarity.
How convenient that Twilight (and us) are going to get to see Rarity next.
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Hello, Ms. Pie
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*blink*
You were right about this story. If you THINK about it too much, it gets weirrrrrrd. Lulz.
I like that it's... ... ... positive? You went out of your way to establish that this is a *consensual* scenario, and I appreciate that.
So many of my nsfw story attempts get completely hung up on world/lore building. But perhaps that CAN be the crux of it. Refreshing to see another author flex in this way--especially one whom I respect. F'naaaaa.
Thanks for making this.
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The key is to recognize that a) your story has to operate on "porn logic," i.e. this is a world where sex can happen between anyone at any time for the flimsiest of reasons and everybody's more or less okay with that, and b) at some point you just have to stop overthinking it and go with whatever feels right.
There's been plenty of comments on this story where people have called out how "unrealistic" it is or pointed out what they think are inconsistencies with the world. My response: It's porn. It's there to titillate and be silly. Chuck Tingle has made a fortune doing things FAR less realistic than what I'm doing here. (Including, might I add, a story where a man has sex with a winged intelligent clone of his own ass).
My advice: Ignore the nitpick brigade, embrace your own madness, and make the sexy stuff you want to see. (But be aware it may not be for everyone.)
Also, try to track down Phil Foglio's Xxxenophile comics. Great inspiration for happy, silly, sexy porn.
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Porn logic.
I *wish* I could wrap my head around that. It’d certainly help me make saucier oneshots. But I always trip on suspension of disbelief and world-building. F’naaaa.
Thanks for the confidence boost, in any case.