Well, all subtlety sorta flew out the window of this fic here, huh? Not that I'm complaining. I'm not used to seeing that many caps lock come (f'naaa) out of Twilight.
But dayum. Hella hawt. Especially with the cameo at the end. Do I detect a future fic theme?
I lurve showers. So that theme hit everything on the head just perfectly.
I'm a bit disappointed that Twilight didn't shout out someone's name at random towards the end. I imagine a name being blurted at the point of climax, and that's what brings her out of the moment. Buttttttttt that would shift the emphasis of the fic towards shipping, and such would be antithetical to the work as a whole, methinks.
Thank you so much for building this world--not just for us but for Twilight here. She deserved the release.
Busted...
...well, that's way to motivate need for "The Talk".
The ending made this.
"We didn't have a detachable showerhead when I was a girl."
"Mom!"
"You're welcome."
...Awkward...
Well, all subtlety sorta flew out the window of this fic here, huh? Not that I'm complaining. I'm not used to seeing that many caps lock come (f'naaa) out of Twilight.
But dayum. Hella hawt. Especially with the cameo at the end. Do I detect a future fic theme?
I lurve showers. So that theme hit everything on the head just perfectly.
I'm a bit disappointed that Twilight didn't shout out someone's name at random towards the end. I imagine a name being blurted at the point of climax, and that's what brings her out of the moment. Buttttttttt that would shift the emphasis of the fic towards shipping, and such would be antithetical to the work as a whole, methinks.
Thank you so much for building this world--not just for us but for Twilight here. She deserved the release.
Dear God, that ending...
Methinks Twilight isn’t the only one getting a release tonight.