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interesting

Well damn that was a interesting hello. I love this so far till the next chapter peace.

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After the human runs off with incredible speed Celestia simply watches in fascination as whatever was effecting her mind starts to fade as she shakes her head.

Was she under a trance?

My name is Princess Celestia ruler of the sun and co-ruler of equestria.

Is she the co-ruler?

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First yes and second I got the idea from other stories since she rules of the day while her sister rules over the night so I figured that it be that way

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Ohh

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Its also why I titled this chapter as WTF

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Because she was in a trance or because of the co-ruler part?

I can't tell if your story already having 500 overall views is ridiculous, understandable, or just depressing.

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I am surprised myself dude but then again something like this hasn't been done before. Which is why I figured why the hell not

“now just calm down there, let's not do anything craz- “the human was cut off as Celestia pounces him causing him to roll out of the way. “fuck this shit I’m out” he said as he runs off in high speed leaving a dust trail as he heads toward the everfree forest and leaving a stunned and possibly horny princess behind. Passing through many trees he makes a stop behind the trunk of a dead tree and leans on it as he tries to catch his breath not due to the run but from what just happened.

Frank McCloud

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I made that name up when I wrote my story

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Some call it curiosity.

“que demonios fue eso porque me besaste?”

¿Eres de habla hispana, compañero?

That would explain the many typos and weird words that I find each chapter.

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I speak Spanish and English but I tend to miss some stuff when writing and trying to type in Spanish is annoying

The human was a bit cautious due to what happened before, but upon looking into the princess's eyes he could tell that she was telling the truth. And after taking a deep breath and exhaling he then responds to her in a calmer tone. “My name is Frank......Frank McCloud.”

Just don't call me Shirley, because if I'm being frank, the name's Frank