I would like to just say that this man is fantastic at writing and is great at storytelling more so than me so you will probably enjoy this guy stories more so than mine if you've read them and have seen the first attempt at it... Yeah not my most greatest moment... but I digress you did good my friend and I hope to see some more great works from you! ^^

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Thank you Red. Thank you very much.

Dr. Wolf huh? That wouldn’t happen to be a reference to the YouTuber Dr. Wolf would it? One of the most well known and respected throughout the brony community.

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Indeed, I felt like he would fit in this world. He is one of my favorite youtubers and I respect him greatly. It also allows me to imagine him and Sunset talking in a session, which may happen in a later chapter. Right now I shall let it sit, than decide on how I shall continue.

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In terms of Sunset having a session with Dr. Wolf. Ever since I found out about him, I’ve been hoping she gets an AMWDW of her own about self forgiveness and not putting the whole world on her shoulders.

I have mixed feelings on this fic. Don't get me wrong thou.
Very well written, and i love it, but hearing how Celestia and Luna also fell for it, and how they ignored Sunset's suffering makes me furious.
I would love to seen celestia get a major chew out for that as well as Luna.

Seems she was forgiven to easily, if you do continue like to see if there were consequences for it small ones such as getting a warning ro shamed for it.
Alos if the other teachers did the same they get chewed out as well.

Glad to see the Rainidiots realizing how badly they screwed up and if the CMC are given proper punishments.
Also how they react to learning Sunset tried to end her life and was saved barely.

Maybe do a chapter showing how they reacted to getting the message on what almost happened and how they reacted to it.

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Your comment has given me ideas. I was planning on having a chapter about the girls talking about how they reacted... and about how this was not really forgiveness.. but the beginning of it. I plan on having flashback or chapters set in the six days skipped over... as a way to show that.. well.. not all was easily forgiven. Celestia and Luna worked hard to earn forgiveness.. and so did the girls... however.. the rest of the staff and student body shall be tackled not just by Sunset... or her new family... but by all of them striving to make sure Sunset is treated fairly.
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That is a great idea... but I could always give my impression of the Good Doctor Wolf for a chapter with a session in it... however... I will need time so I can get his tone and feel down pat.

You both have given me ideas... but their is no set schedule for updates.. Life is busy... but I won't leave it unfinished... if necessary.. I shall have it end via time skip... a meeting... and Sunset going to heaven after living her life. But that is just if I can no longer work on this story or I find myself out of ideas. So to all, I will accept ideas or inspiration... but know I have some myself... especially about a certain story element.. (AKA I ship Sunset and Fluttershy) so that keeps my brain making ideas and planning stuff.. just to make a cute ship... but hardships shall make it strong. After all.. the short description says it all.

I shall say this now, for all who have ideas to give me, pm me them so we do not spoil the story for others. Just something someone brought up, and their right on why this should be how you all should send me messages about the story.

Also thank you for those who have featured me in Anon-A-Miss and Suicide Groups. I hope you all enjoyed my work so far. More chapters coming soon, just slowly. No set schedule so keep an eye out for them.

i would like to see a continuation of this. i have not come across a concept like this and it intrigues me.

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I am working on the next chapter, one I hope you all shall enjoy. It will take tame, for my life is busy. But do not fear, this story shall not die, for I like it to much. I also am happy you find it intriguing. Tell me, is it the supernatural elements at play, or what makes you find it so interesting?

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it kinda remind remind me a the poem nevermore. but mostly with death itself coming in and intervening with sunset's suicide attempt. in many other stories i've read death is usually the impartial party or simply the straight up bad guy. this is the first time i've seen where death tries to actually stop someone from killing themselves.

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Well this Death hates his job. He hates seeing such life wasted and end so soon. Xavier is not your typical Death, for he actually wants to help others. Having reaped and talk to the dead for eons, a change of pace is just what the doctor ordered for him.
So I hope you continue to enjoy this story.

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so do i

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May i suggest the discworld series by sir terry pratchett, i think you may enjoy death and his family

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you have a link?

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Its a series of books, the death series starts with Mort, its quite an old series but my god is it worth reading

This is great and I really hope to hear more from this canon, I kinda see this death character as a toned down discord. I love the feeling you gave him as an old caring man who just doesn't want someone to cut their experiences short. Also in my mind he has a voice like death from the amazon Good Omens show.

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I am glad you enjoy this canon and this story so far. I never thought of Xavier as a toned down Discord, but I see the similarities between them. Yes, Xavier is a very old, and very caring, man who likes to see people live out their life to the fullest. You will see more of him later on I promise you. I haven't watch Good Omens, so when I do I'll keep an ear out for Death's voice when I watch it. Personally he sounds like the War Doctor, aka John Hurt, but you can imagine him to sound like anyone you want.

Long but very well written.

I normally don't do this on stories that have been out for a while, but I feel it important to mention that in your little wrap up paragraph at the end, that should really read "heroine", that extra e at the end is kind of important, hehe. I also noticed at least one instance of you using principle when you meant principal.

That said, this seems like a pretty decent foundation to build a story on.

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I heard X Men's Charles Xavier's voice(Patrick Stewart!)

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I Heard X Men's Charles Xavier A.K.A Patrick Stewart. First name and voice that came to mind to me!

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I'm adding Dr Wolf to my own anon a miss story I'm working on!

Even Fluttershy believed it.”

This is the second time she mentioned Fluttershy explicitly, is this just because Fluttershy is so amazing and kind or do I smell a ship