Sunset Shimmer can't bare to live in this hateful world anymore. Will she give up or can she be saved. Will this flame of hope shimmer no longer?
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Interesting.
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What is so interesting my friend?
Couldn't be AJ's strange Behavior? Oh perhaps something else? Oh so tell what us so interesting LEIGON555 and even PM me if you find it is spoilory.
Also feel free to see wise and just discuss what's happening in the story between chapters I mean come on. But I like reading your comments and gives me a bit of warm feeling in my chest when I know hey people like what I'm doing and they're talking about it you need to give me that sense of creating something engaging and interesting for all of you to enjoy.
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Just the concept. Ps I'm glad to see this update!!!!!
I'm sorry while I'm glad you used my idea...Grammar Grammar Grammar!!
It a bit mish mash and some of the stuff makes no sense.
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Please explain this more, as I am actually horrible at grammar. I blame myself who has an odd mix of learning german while growing up. So, German and English have melded together. I often have to check for habe, ist, and other slight nuances in my writing. I don't know why I do this, as I speak English and perhaps it is due to my novice writing skills and habits when I was taking a foreign language. Any and all help will be appreciated. The story isn't dead, I just have life happening, sick grandma, grandfather going mental, and my own future being shaken up. But, I will finish this story, to the best of my ability.
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Ok. Sorry to hear what happening, I hope things get better. Hang in there.
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Thank you for your concern, I hope things get better too. I have ideas and the story all set, just have to get time to put it down. Thank you for the support too.
Please continueeee🙏😭 the plot is good and the story telling is great the only complain i have is the blue part of the story not that it makes it bad. I just like making my own assumptions on how the story will go rather than have the authors guide me to what may come and let me be surprised once they revealed it. The lessons in life in the blue part is a nice touch though
Is that a figure of speech or is something going on with the Apple family?
Also I love how this is Apple Bloom punishment, I have what if you fix where she either gets spanked with a switch or beaten, it's refreshing to see effect that doesn't have the Apple family use corporal punishment
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I can not comment.
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And thanks, I been very busy, life has been keeping me down, but the Apple Family view punishments of the productive kind, doing chores and such. Plus it shows Granny is not cruel or hurtful. It fits their dynamic I think.
Also damn, I gotta write more on this, checking my rough drafts, oh boy. Now I got a new fan, can't keep you all waiting.
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I very much agree, I honestly hate a lot of the fandom portrayals of the Apple family, because of how many of them featured corporal punishment AKA abuse, granny loves her grandkids and would never lay a finger/hoof on any of them in any universe, like I said this portrayal is refreshing
Why? It wasn’t the CMC that pushed Sunset to kill herself. Hell, they were the only one to apologize and show remorse for their behavior. AJ is literally asking to shove the blame for this onto her sister, and Granny agrees. That’s all kinds of fucked up.
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True, though I am trying to show how AJ's making her own punishment with guilt and stress, and she is not the one in charge of Bloom, that is Granny, who is having her do chores as punishment and lack of friends, but that is what she says, not do. Might be a bit hard, but it is also fair. Granny ain't cruel to her grandkids.