Ms.Harshwhinny invites Spike to stay for dinner after the Equestria Games
Again, not a bad chapter. Some more grammar and punctuation errors, but other than that its fine.
"What if he's not interested?" She thought as she ran the fabric between her figures
Anxiety is not one character I did not expect from her. Have to hand it to Spike to break the hard-shell of Harsh.
She's about to make her move!
good chapter. I few typos including this one "just having it on would give Spike more than enough singles that she wanted him to take notice of her"
unless her original thought was to strip to a g-string during her striptease for Spike, I think the "singles" should be signals.
Go on Harshwhinny get your Dragon.
Again, not a bad chapter. Some more grammar and punctuation errors, but other than that its fine.
Anxiety is not one character I did not expect from her. Have to hand it to Spike to break the hard-shell of Harsh.
She's about to make her move!
good chapter. I few typos including this one
"just having it on would give Spike more than enough singles that she wanted him to take notice of her"
unless her original thought was to strip to a g-string during her striptease for Spike, I think the "singles" should be signals.
Go on Harshwhinny get your Dragon.