Ms.Harshwhinny invites Spike to stay for dinner after the Equestria Games
9878503I always looking to see what you'll comment, Thanks I appreciate the PMA
This is not a bad chapter at all. A few grammar and punctuation mistakes here and there, but overall, not bad.
She's really putting this plan into motion oh, isn't she?
This story is building up nicely.
9878805thank you, this motivates me to keep working on it
9878820Uh yeah I mean I don't....... Know.......
I like Ocellus and Smolder as a couple.
10132562so do I
9878503
I always looking to see what you'll comment, Thanks I appreciate the PMA
This is not a bad chapter at all. A few grammar and punctuation mistakes here and there, but overall, not bad.
She's really putting this plan into motion oh, isn't she?
This story is building up nicely.
9878805
thank you, this motivates me to keep working on it
9878820
Uh yeah I mean I don't....... Know.......
I like Ocellus and Smolder as a couple.
10132562
so do I