Gallus is just your average teenaged griffon, with perfectly normal griffony wants and needs. When he gets an opportunity to acquire what he desires most, he never anticipates just how it can go wrong.
“I won’t...” he muttered, then blinked. Oh, crap. “Wait! We have homework?” he shouted as he flew after her. “Professor Fluttershy!” he wailed. “I wasn’t paying attention!”
So... he's nipples are getting more sensitive, and he's quite moody... did the mirror make him pregnant? Or, you know, pregnant with an egg or however it is called in that case?
“Huh. I think the molt is way simpler. You’re old enough to do that sort of stuff, see yah!” Smolder said
The "see yah" at the end of this sentence is wierd, it seems out of place and makes me thank she is leaving the room now. Did you mean to say "so yah"?
“Mooning after her and sitting her sulking isn’t going to change it.”
Should be 'sitting here sulking'.
He was so heavily in the friend zone that he would probably be a bridesmaid at whatever hippogriff lord Silverstream was forced to marry.
I would change this to "be a bridesmaid at the wedding to whatever hippogriff lord..."
I Gallus getting some extreme HRT courtesy of the mirror?
Ah, okay, so Silverstream's into girls and the mirror is turning Gallus into one to help.
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That's exactly what I'm thinking.
Dang it gallus
So this is the point Gallus realises he's made a terrible, terrible mistake.
Rejection's always rough, especially when you're younger.
So... he's nipples are getting more sensitive, and he's quite moody... did the mirror make him pregnant? Or, you know, pregnant with an egg or however it is called in that case?
Needs to drop an egg i guess
The complete version of the cover art on derpibooru gives major parts of the story away.
The "see yah" at the end of this sentence is wierd, it seems out of place and makes me thank she is leaving the room now. Did you mean to say "so yah"?
Should be 'sitting here sulking'.
I would change this to "be a bridesmaid at the wedding to whatever hippogriff lord..."
Love this story, please continue!!
I like this, this is nice.
When did Silverstream actually say there was something wrong with her? I don't see it. Was that in a previous version?