Gallus is just your average teenaged griffon, with perfectly normal griffony wants and needs. When he gets an opportunity to acquire what he desires most, he never anticipates just how it can go wrong.
This continues to be amusing. A bit more proofreading and spellchecking wouldn't go amiss, though; Ocellus gets called Occelus several times, etc. 9875218 Well, Gallus means "rooster", so... (Plot twist: he turns into Scootaloo.)
Beware the glass gryphon bearing hand jobs and pudding.
And for some reason I keep thinking of that one song about someone porking their reflection, or something like that. I can't seem to remember much about it besides that
Ocellus leaned away from Gallus, her eyes narrowed in suspicion, for a few seconds before going on. “Good thing too. That was Chrysalis’s jelly. I can’t believe Thorax sent it. Of course he also sent a dozen other bits and pieces too. Fortunately, Knucklebocker’s Shell was magic enough to count. Or... unfortunately.” the Changeling pointed out.
Knuckerbocker* (spelling via Daring Do and the Eternal Flower)
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Hold up. Is that a punch ghosts reference?!
Thanks for the story and see you next week I guess.
Huh. Is this going to be a "Gallus turns into a chick" fic? Those are surprisingly common.
This continues to be amusing. A bit more proofreading and spellchecking wouldn't go amiss, though; Ocellus gets called Occelus several times, etc.
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Well, Gallus means "rooster", so...
(Plot twist: he turns into Scootaloo.)
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damn it. I suck at my own spellchecking.
I got all the Ocelluses. If you note any others, let me know.
Beware the glass gryphon bearing hand jobs and pudding.
And for some reason I keep thinking of that one song about someone porking their reflection, or something like that. I can't seem to remember much about it besides that
Evil, Mint, same flavour tbh.
End of the first sentence is cut off.
Should be "stated". Also Yak.
Should be "him".
Remove "at".
Beginning of sentence seems to be missing a word or too.
If you want a prereader, I would be glad to assist. Loving this story!!
Knuckerbocker*
(spelling via Daring Do and the Eternal Flower)