Escape of the Rainbow Factory

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Lofty Withers

Lofty Withers #1 · Sep 21st, 2019 · · ·

This story would benefit from some editing. Here are some resources you may find helpful.

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Herobrine1087

Herobrine1087 #2 · Sep 21st, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Thank you I will take this inconsideration

SuperSaiyanDiclonius

SuperSaiyanDiclonius #3 · Sep 21st, 2019 · 1 · ·

You have my attention.

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