Spike Wilhlem Drake, orphaned at the age of 7 is living a double life. One side is dealing with that of a normal highschool student, the other is speeding down the streets of Cantorlot on his custom motorcycle.
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Hm. A few grammar errors here and there but overall I like this so far. I'm assuming the crossover is with Sons Of Anarchy?
Nope didn’t even think about that and never watched the show, but thanks.
9837543
What's the crossover with? Also to reply to someone hit the double arrow icon near the top right of the icon.
9837562
I don’t really remember but I’ll probably go with your idea of a sons of anarchy because it fits with what I’m going with. Also I know how to reply.
9837563
Okay.
Well, lucky for her, it has four wheels and independent suspension on each, so it's not really a motorcycle. On the other hand, it has an extremely wide turning radius, and no one has been stupid enough in real life to go past 100 mph on one of the few that were built.
Btw, the Tomahawk used the 8.3L V10 from the third-gen Dodge Viper SRT-10 - first and second-gen were 8.0L, fourth and fifth-gen used an 8.4L. No 8.2L exists, not factory stock, anyway.
9837592
Thanks for the information I’ll change it soon to make it right.
This is looking like a good start. I'll keep an eye on it and see what else Spike gets involved in.
ok this story is very fun to read, can't wait to see whats going to occur during this story
9837768
You...do know this is a make-believe story about a dragon in a made up world called Equestria, right?
9838056
I think the guy wants to avoid this story crossing over with Sons of Anarchy because there's "enough people" out there who think "motorcycles = Sons of Anarchy.
9838120
As a form of entertainment, sons of anarchy is fine. The issue is that people believe that's what motorcycle culture is all about, and then are disappointed when they realize they have to get a license. I've never been a fan of sons of anarchy, and my opinion is that I wouldn't like it if this story went down that route.
9838056
Yes, I'm aware this is a story, and the things I said are suggestions of what to take into consideration when writing about motorcycles. As authors, we should try to do a little bit of research into what we're writing about in order to make the story more believable to readers. It doesn't mean that every little detail has to be correct, but saying, for example, that Spike had chosen a full-face helmet instead of an open-face because of his concerns for safety would add some depth to the story, and make it more interesting to the reader. Just my two cents.
For the record, I'm happy that someone is writing a story that includes motorcycles, even if it may be flawed. Kudos to the writer for doing something I've lacked the inspiration to do.
9838322
Isn't that kind of what I just said?
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Yep. Just clarifying.
9838495
Okay. I respect your decision.
9838120
I deleted the original comment. It was way more harsh than I intended it to be. As a motorcyclist, I meant to offer some of my knowledge on how the author could improve his story, and I didn't think my reply through thoroughly. I apologize for that.
ho shit bor Spike Is a boss
9838519
I don't think it was harsh. I neither play Son's of Anarchy or ride a motorcycle, so I wasn't offended.
Remember those six time lines created in the fifth season finale? I wonder if Spike will be fighting those who were in charge of those time lines?
...why do I feel like Fluttershy is part of the gang?
And why do I find a Fluttershy in black leather hot?
9851163
No she is not, and no comment.
9851166
Aw a shame really. I would'vs liked that
Capitalize a Spike. Basstered to bastard.
Capitalize Velvet.
At least 2 more grammer errors but I lost them by clicking a link.
This guy goes from 17 years old to 16 years old in the matter of 5 paragraphs...weird. As for a super exotic bike the Tomahawk is pretty cool (even though it's not a bike) I would have chosen the Y2K bike.