After awakoning withing the heart of a ruined ship, our hero is on a quest to discover why he was aboard while dealing with a land full of Anthropomorphic Ponies
Wow these ponies are cunts also this guy just let a rando dig around in his mouth for 10mins........first fucken gross, second that's sounds like a quick way of getting yourself bit or punched in the throat by a normal person.
Why are you rewriting this story?
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Rushed through it initially and skipped a lot of plot openings that I wanted to involve
I've completely forgotten about the old story anyway since it has been stuck in my Tracking list for who knows how long.
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Yea, to be honest I completely forgot about it also. But hopefully it'll be alright
Wow these ponies are cunts also this guy just let a rando dig around in his mouth for 10mins........first fucken gross, second that's sounds like a quick way of getting yourself bit or punched in the throat by a normal person.
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My reasoning for letting her do so was probably to better his chances of getting medical treatment
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well ponies don't seem to have the Hippocratic oath
What I've read of the first chapter seems intriguing, but the story doesn't belong in the language barrier section.