Centuries ago an ancient relic of great power, was thrown into another world. Now that relic has resurfaced and chosen its newest bearer, who will use its power to change his life forever.
Hmm I already stated what I thought he should do earlier but if your trying to keep things simple .... rarity next that way she can make them lingerie or outfits or baby clothes at the rate he's going hopefully sunset and RD were allready using something like twilight.... plus she can put cameras in her changing rooms for his enjoyment or use it for blackmail maybe. Have her drug someone she's helping with a dress.
It could be fun if Flash doesn't keep all the girls to himself. Like, he could do something for his guy friends at school, get them slaves of their own. Heck, he could do that to the entire school, one pairing by one.
As for his own use, I still think Derpy is a fine target, especially with her bubble butt. He could have one of the girls ask her if she has a crush on him, and she admits that she does. They abduct her after that. Flash could get her just on the edge, then spank her for it, then edge her again until she begs to be allowed to cum—at which point he spanks her to orgasm.
As Flash state first, the dangerous one need to be cleared. So AJ would be the first one since AJ and Dash have some "maybe intimate" relationship so it'd be better to strike AJ first.
How? AJ has love to do things barefoot, so why we didn't include some tickling and sexy massaging here?~~
I think that using Dash to get to Fluttershy (via just their friendship, or using Tank as an excuse) would be good, plus her being the demure one means she can be a secret weapon later.
A few spelling errors here and there but over-all a great story, Really enjoying the Mind Control aspect of it, along with the kinky stuff... Keep it up!
Hmm I already stated what I thought he should do earlier but if your trying to keep things simple .... rarity next that way she can make them lingerie or outfits or baby clothes at the rate he's going hopefully sunset and RD were allready using something like twilight.... plus she can put cameras in her changing rooms for his enjoyment or use it for blackmail maybe. Have her drug someone she's helping with a dress.
It could be fun if Flash doesn't keep all the girls to himself. Like, he could do something for his guy friends at school, get them slaves of their own. Heck, he could do that to the entire school, one pairing by one.
As for his own use, I still think Derpy is a fine target, especially with her bubble butt. He could have one of the girls ask her if she has a crush on him, and she admits that she does. They abduct her after that. Flash could get her just on the edge, then spank her for it, then edge her again until she begs to be allowed to cum—at which point he spanks her to orgasm.
Pinkie or AJ next. I'd think Pinkie getting invited over to the house for a private party.
As Flash state first, the dangerous one need to be cleared. So AJ would be the first one since AJ and Dash have some "maybe intimate" relationship so it'd be better to strike AJ first.
How? AJ has love to do things barefoot, so why we didn't include some tickling and sexy massaging here?~~
I think that using Dash to get to Fluttershy (via just their friendship, or using Tank as an excuse) would be good, plus her being the demure one means she can be a secret weapon later.
No one expects the Fluttershy Inquisition
A few spelling errors here and there but over-all a great story, Really enjoying the Mind Control aspect of it, along with the kinky stuff... Keep it up!
I'd love to see Rarity be degraded