Shining Armor is trying to be a better father. His little filly, Flurry Heart, has grown up so fast... she's almost 16! But things seems to be so distant between the two of them... is there some way that he could regain her love?
Now this is really good extreme shower? Hell yea cant wait for next one. Torn between 2 or 3 but the first time still feels like it must be 2. Only hope theres time for 3 and 1 later Both of them.
Going for #1. Honestly really liking the pacing in which things are going and I think Flurry is being written in a consistent way, progressively opening up to Shining Armor.
9712156 Just remove the parts that say url, the brackets, and the bit that says stores, and the link works just fine. I think he might have accidentally messed up inserting the link when he was in the editor.
9712156 Check the end-of-chapter note. The links are broken intentionally, because it's against the rules to link to NSFW content for some reason, even in an NSFW story.
I was working on a comment and all my windows closed. I take this as a sign from the gods that my long post wasn't meant to be so I'll do the normal person thing and limit my reaction to a single line.
Flurry coughed, wiping her chin and her eyes. “Bleh… *huf*... that’s a lot harder than it looked on those pornStable.com videos…”
It's a popular sentiment among most bronies I say that in writing, the ponies are basically just regular people. I have to disagree with the consensus opinion. I've always thought ponies are us but better. Humanity has created legends of gods and ideal forms since humans have been a thing. We know, deep down, that we are pieces are shit living at odds with the natural order. The ponies meanwhile manage everything from the weather to nature out of a deep respect for life. Why should the ponies be like us when they can be better than us and serve as an example of what we could be?
I know I'm at odds with the fandom here but I wish the ponies could just be ponies. If I didn't care, I'd be reading/watching Equestria Girls which is happy to remove anything and everything that makes the ponies unique and interesting and place a group of gals who once preserved the wild frontier of Ponyville from all manner of dangers to go rot in some school and do stupid teenager things. Blech!
10437064 I'm guessing you're suggesting that ponies wouldn't have porn sites? Could be.
I think ponies are likely a bit more saccharine than us, but in general they will probably be similar to us I'm order to have a functioning society.
We would chat philosophy some time, because I could wax poetic, but I wonder if the nature of man is fundamentally evil or fallen. We certainly tend to see ourselves that way, but there is an intrinsic goodness in us: we created ponies after all :)
Now this is really good extreme shower? Hell yea cant wait for next one. Torn between 2 or 3 but the first time still feels like it must be 2. Only hope theres time for 3 and 1 later
Both of them.
I'm voting for 2 because they need to kiss after this chapter.
I know the votes are pretty set, but I feel like option 1 is more of a "she's pretty confident" option and 3 is a "let's ease her into this" one.
That's how I would frame it, anyway.
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Let me know if you guys enjoyed the chapter you just read, too! It will let me know if you think flurry is being written the right way!
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Going for #1. Honestly really liking the pacing in which things are going and I think Flurry is being written in a consistent way, progressively opening up to Shining Armor.
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Time to put a filly in his filly to increase his fun later~
none of the links in the story work
I choose 2
Noone likes buttstuff...
that was perfect, keep going your on a roll ;D
of course web porn stuffxD and so true
Number 1. Definitely 1. She needs to know that nopony can rut her better than daddy.
Number 1, if only because she'll go crazy otherwise.
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Oh yeah it's fine, no complaints
Voting for 2!
Not sure what you were trying to put here but that link is broken. Leads to a 404.
Gotta go with 1. Then we'll get to 2 or 3.
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Just remove the parts that say url, the brackets, and the bit that says stores, and the link works just fine. I think he might have accidentally messed up inserting the link when he was in the editor.
I may be gay, but even I can enjoy daddy/daughter incest.
Another great chapter! #3 than 1! Let her see how much she can take, before you pound that sweet, sweet young mare pussy!
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Check the end-of-chapter note. The links are broken intentionally, because it's against the rules to link to NSFW content for some reason, even in an NSFW story.
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Correct. Not for her first time. It doesn't fit the scenario at all. Maybe if there's a "one year later" sequel or something, but not now.
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Womb invasion, let's go. Breedin' time.
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I'm sure that he'll have enough common sense to use protection.
Voting for 3!
3 and 1
Voting for 1 here.
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You did read the name of this fan fiction. Right?
Image from the link in story was deleted.
I was working on a comment and all my windows closed. I take this as a sign from the gods that my long post wasn't meant to be so I'll do the normal person thing and limit my reaction to a single line.
It's a popular sentiment among most bronies I say that in writing, the ponies are basically just regular people. I have to disagree with the consensus opinion. I've always thought ponies are us but better. Humanity has created legends of gods and ideal forms since humans have been a thing. We know, deep down, that we are pieces are shit living at odds with the natural order. The ponies meanwhile manage everything from the weather to nature out of a deep respect for life. Why should the ponies be like us when they can be better than us and serve as an example of what we could be?
I know I'm at odds with the fandom here but I wish the ponies could just be ponies. If I didn't care, I'd be reading/watching Equestria Girls which is happy to remove anything and everything that makes the ponies unique and interesting and place a group of gals who once preserved the wild frontier of Ponyville from all manner of dangers to go rot in some school and do stupid teenager things. Blech!
The sex in this chapter was breddy gud though.
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I'm guessing you're suggesting that ponies wouldn't have porn sites? Could be.
I think ponies are likely a bit more saccharine than us, but in general they will probably be similar to us I'm order to have a functioning society.
We would chat philosophy some time, because I could wax poetic, but I wonder if the nature of man is fundamentally evil or fallen. We certainly tend to see ourselves that way, but there is an intrinsic goodness in us: we created ponies after all :)