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The dark cloud is brewing into a storm with every chapter you publish, the puppeteer is now nearing to its goal but who is this Master? What is their endgame? Only staying tune we shall have are answer spoken.
This chapter is good I would say, I'm gonna feel bad for Luna and Chrys when Chrysalis gets there and I can see chrysalis getting cross if some nobles start offering their children in marriage to Luna, while she's beside her and can't do about it or risk hurting her lover reputation. Worse the noble is the less of their problem when chrysalis mother gets there and this supreme cult or something arrives, since the lover only wants to spend time together and have fun with the fouls
change to her
All in all your English is improving steadily, it makes me happy to read one of my favorites stories and seeing a new chapter it Russell my feather in joy.
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Thanks a lot for noticing that mistake, I already corrected it.
Also its really nice to know that all my efort to translate the story is working, specially with the very long chapters.
Thanks again for your suport and enjoy the next chapter.