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nice work, but get an editor to look it through
This is some sadistic shit, no offense
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What did Celestia forgot that made Luna terribly upset?
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HI!
In the previous chapter Luna mentioned that she prepared a shooting stars show to the delight of their citizens. And she made sure to ask Celestia to help her by spreading the word, 'Cause she was bussy practicing the performance during her free time. Unfortunately due to the workload they already have, Celestia forgot to warn the kingdom that the event would take place that night.
So thats why Luna became upset. Cause she thought that her subjects knew abouth the show, but didn't care at all.
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Thank you for answering my question.
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Your wellcome, It's a pleasure to do it
I don't think people care about disclaimers on this site, you wrote this story so it belongs to you. Plus 'I don't own' disclaimers are pointless in the book of law anyways.
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Thanks for the advice. I really didn't know if I should have place the disclamer before cause i am using some characters that are not mine, like Snowdrop.
I have a bad feeling that Epsilon and Siegfried aren’t going to make it back to the castle on time.
Was Pink Wine mentioned in the story before? Things are probably going to get ugly once they encounter the Changelings. See you in 2020!
Isn't that kind of a forgone conclusion?
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Sorry for the delay, es Pink Wine was inoduced in the Chapter 13th like his brother Red Wine.
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Well In some way you can tell that it is a dead end. The importance is that I am trying to make a back story of what make Luna took that path.
I'm loving this story greatly even more with LunaxChrysalis being an item, even the characters keep changing their gender annoy me but that's only a minor inconvenience. Thinking about it having nightmare and Luna as a balanced power with two minds in one body, that need to have consensus on anything is a very powerful entity. To bad that not gonna happen. Keep up the good work
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Thank you so much for your review.
I have to check previous chapters and corect those mistakes. Hopefully wont take me too much.
And don't worry the story will keep going, I was bussy with some of the future chapters. But my goal is to finish it.
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Glad you like it.
Well, Vynil Scratch great-grams entered the chat.
Ohh~ things are getting good, Celestia may end up doing harm than good with luna and Chrysalis situation. There must be something big that may push Luna becoming Nightmare moon, with Celestia talk with the zebra Chrysalis life maybe .no. WILL be endangered once more not just from her mother but from Celestia and her followers, with the tension in the coming party will be an all-time high and misunderstanding will happen.
We now know a bit of changeling lore here, we all know what will happen in the future and the reason chrysalis hating Celestia and equestria in the future, with no choice our lovebug will have to take her heart out to survive without luna. Great story, I'm really really into this story of yours hope to see new chapters.
Thank you for your comment. Im glad you are ejoying it this much.
The dark cloud is brewing into a storm with every chapter you publish, the puppeteer is now nearing to its goal but who is this Master? What is their endgame? Only staying tune we shall have are answer spoken.
This chapter is good I would say, I'm gonna feel bad for Luna and Chrys when Chrysalis gets there and I can see chrysalis getting cross if some nobles start offering their children in marriage to Luna, while she's beside her and can't do about it or risk hurting her lover reputation. Worse the noble is the less of their problem when chrysalis mother gets there and this supreme cult or something arrives, since the lover only wants to spend time together and have fun with the fouls
change to her
All in all your English is improving steadily, it makes me happy to read one of my favorites stories and seeing a new chapter it Russell my feather in joy.
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Thanks a lot for noticing that mistake, I already corrected it.
Also its really nice to know that all my efort to translate the story is working, specially with the very long chapters.
Thanks again for your suport and enjoy the next chapter.
The stage is set, as the light shines upon their actors, as the invisible guiding hand of fate and Destiny toys with the mortal hearts and minds. There are two possible scenarios on how this will go badly in my head: 1) that our colorful zebra friend created a scene that will spark the domino effect. 2) that Celestia ends up mentioning about chrysalis disgusted mother in front of the two love birds.
Good choice of song for this chapter in my opinion and your English occurred no errors, keep up the good job. For now, I shall re-read this story once again.
how I wish that in at least one of the "prequel" stories, the events went against the canon.
- do you believe in destiny, Neo?
- No.
- why?
- it is unpleasant to think that you are being manipulated.
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That was a great reference!
Yeah, I know. it is not common to read a prequel with a diferent ending, though I might change some other things. I'll have a long journey with this story.
it's hard to read a story when you know it will end sadly. You get used to the characters and want everything to turn out differently for them, but without the "alternate universe" tag it's the same as watching a movie about the eve of World War II and hoping that Hitler will suddenly die of a heart attack or that the Titanic will not stumble upon Iceberg
I think it's better not to tell Chrysalis that several dozen of her brothers were killed in the process of her rescue.
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Certanly, specially if the one who killed most of them was Her precious Luna.
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Yeah, I know what you mean. I hope I can put some interesting things in the story to solve that.
Ok. That was unexpected, look like new players just joined the boiling pot and they sound wicked and cool. *sigh* looks like and feels like chrysalis is about to cry every time she thinks about her heart situation, she will never destroy her love for luna, she will never harm her even to the point of hurting herself to protect her. Time is drawing near, the pot is about to break from the flame. Luna and Chrysalis veil of a secret that protects them are now about to fall unto them.
This chapter is wonderful to read, the happy moment for the two lovers and the looming dread to fall. It brightens my day everytime I read your story.
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Thank you very much. This chapter was hard for me cause I had to translate a lot of information. I'm glad it worth it.
The way you mark people talking makes it seem like this is all one big flashback or dream sequence for some reason.
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Hi. Thanks for your comment and time you took to read the story.
I didn't knew that it was written that way. I just try to put thoughts of the characters between commas and linesfor diálogos. But I think the first chaptesrs had problems with that.
hope I can correcto them as soon as posible.
It's alright if this chapter took so long to make, the only thing that matters is that you're not giving up. don't worry about luna & celestia scene and the rhyming dialogue I think it's alright the way I read it so chin up.
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Thanks a lot for your support
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Glad you like it
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Glad you like This chapter
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I'm glad you like this new chapter.
I'm very happy to see a new chapter to one of my favorite stories continue.
The hourglass stood imposing, as its sands slowly fall. The coming choice that shall decide the fate of the future between love or duty is a choice of three mares. As others within light and dark pull their strings.
Well, I'm glad to see a sneak peek of the upcoming story, but it got me curious, what methods of time travel are you gonna use?
The multiversal timeline: changes the event of the past but nothing changes in the future but created a new timeline.
The Linear timeline: changes the past so as the future (the back to the future time travel logic)
If it's the former then it will be very tragic for twilight, for she shall live in her reality
But either way, I shall wait happily for it.
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I'm glad you like the story this much. The new chapter is online now. Have some fun.
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Thanks for reading