Let the show begin
Pinkie sat in the middle of her tarnished room, shaking and scared. The dim moonlight coming through the small openings of the boarded up windows shined on her tear stained face. She was staring at her blood stained hoof with the most satanic grin. “I’ve gone insane haven’t I,” Pinkie Pie whispered.
“I’ve gone insane!,” Pinkie screamed, her mane suddenly dropping perfectly straight. “AND I LOVE IT HAHAHA!” Pinkamena laughed. Pinkamena got up off the floor and looked around her, examining the room. She could see broken glass, blood splats and objects littered all around the room.
“Jeez Pinkie you could've at least cleaned up after all you were expecting a guest” Pinkamena mocked. Silently giggling to herself at her own joke. ‘First thing to do is take care of that stupid mare, sticking her nose in affairs that don’t concern her.’
She walked down the stairs and started to pull the wooden planks of the door, she stepped outside into the glow of the moonlight. She started to head in the direction of Ponyville’s public library. It’s still night, good this should make my job easier...
She approached the library and started knocking on the door “Twilight wake up! Something urgent has come up!” Pinkamena shouted trying not grin at her lie. She kept knocking until the door swung open. A groggy looking purple mare stood in the hallway. “Pinkie... ah what’s the problem and couldn’t it of waited till morning? Twilight asked irritated by the late night call.
The pink pony ran past Twilight into her library putting on a distressed face. “Oh no Twilight it’s just horrible, it couldn’t wait, but first wheres Spike?” Twilight slammed the door closed and turned to her friend. “He’s at Canterlot on some important business for me, but why? And what’s the problem,?” Asked Twilight starting to wonder what was wrong with her friend.
“Also what’s up with your mane? I have never seen it like that.” Pinkamena walked over to her friend, ignoring the last question. “That’s good, he doesn’t need to be here. Also heres the problem,” She moved to whisper in her ear. “Pinkamena Diane Pie has returned.” Pinkamena hissed.
“Wait... What?” Twilight asked confused. Before she could ask another question Pinkamena raised her hoof and hit her across the face. The purple mare fell backwards onto the floor stunned at what just happened. “Pinkie what are you doing!?” She screamed at the pink mare.
“I’M NOT PINKIE!” Pinkamena screeched charging at Twilight for another attack. Twilight charged up a spell and aimed at her friend. She unleashed a purple beam heading straight for the mad mare. Pinkamena dove out of the way, but Twilight was quick and quickly fired another hitting her across the face, slicing her cheek and leaving a little blood to drip out.
The fight came to a stand still and the two mares glared at each other. Twilight stood up off the floor and got ready for another attack. Pinkamena licked the blood of her cheek and threw a smile at Twilight. “That was exciting, don’t you think?” Pinkamena asked now breathing in and out trying to prepare herself. “Pinkie what’s going on?” Questioned Twilight behind gritted teeth.
Pinkamena started to laugh leaving the purple mare even more confused. “You really don’t know oh wow. You’re supposed to be the smartest pony in this town? I’m really beginning to doubt that,” Pinkamena mocked her just causing Twilight to become more angry.
“This is revenge... You tried to get rid of me, did you really think it would be that easy?” Pinkamena giggled to herself. Twilight came to a realisation “Wait... You really are Pinkamena Diane Pie. You really do exist, but you’re obviously not the real Pinkie. Pinkie snap out of it! Come to your senses!” Twilight shouted at the sadistic pony.
“She can't hear you... Don’t waste your breath, you’re gonna need it. This is my body now and nopony is gonna take it away from me!” Pinkamena shouted back the shaking mare across the room. “Why are you doing this? We can sort something out I know we ca-”
Twilight was cut of as the pink pony started charging at her again. She tried to fire up another spell fast, but she was too late. Pinkamena jumped on top of her and wrestled the unicorn to the floor. She pinned her down and stared with hateful eyes into her pupils. Pinkamena headbutted the trapped mare knocking her out.
Her head fell to the side and her body stopped moving. Pinkamena stepped off her and examined the unicorns limp body. She could see that she was still breathing. She looked at her and felt disgusted. ‘Pathetic the student of Princess Celestia herself was beaten by one pony. I expected her to put up a better fight’
Pinkamena grabbed her victim’s hoof by her mouth and began to drag her into the back room.
‘Now the real fun can begin...’
Author’s note.
I hope this new chapter is better than the one I removed.
Also this was un-edited, if you see any mistakes please point them out to me.
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wow, the last thing you expect at around 4 in the morning is a story that you think is finished to remove its ending and start again, but besides that it was good although i would have been fine with the ending you gave it. I'm assuming that this might go on for a bit longer, right?
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I wasn't happy with the ending, I really wanted to change it and yes this story shall go on for longer now, but chapter updates may be slower than normal because I'm writing this one and another. That being 'The Mystery of Our Past' Even though it appears to be getting ignored by viewers, but I refuse to drop it so I will finish it. I hope you enjoyed this chapter.
1148216 Another thing im surprised by is getting a reply from you at 5 in the morning, but still i'll look forward to the next chapter, and i'll check out your other story also.
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Oh thank's for checking out the other story.
It's actually 10 in the morning here, I also haven't slept.
I have insomnia so I usually don't sleep.
1148238 Yea i have the same thing although mine is more voluntary, and partially due to all the piled up fics i have to catch up on, and instead of adding yours to the long wait line i guess ill read it before i decided to go to sleep.
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Thanks for reading! Don't forget to comment on it.
I promise the story is going somewhere...
This is a very interesting take on something of a legend in the fandom. I've read some Pinkamena stories, but this is kinda different. It's also less gory and more emotion-showing than the others. For instance, those confrontation scences in Pinkie's head were very in-depth.
Result? Five mustaches.
Wow, wow, wait up. What ending ?
Also, I love where this is going ! ¡ !
Edit : Don't you DARE pull a Cupcake on us !
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That's exactly what I'm trying to aim for. Every Pinkamena story I have read has relied on gore to keep it interesting.
I wanted to show her story from an emotional point of view and not just have her as this sick monster that kills people for no reason.
I want Pinkamena Diane Pie to come to life in emotion, not an empty shell of a sadist.
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I promise I'm not gonna pull a Cupcakes out of the bag and I'm glad you liked this chapter.
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And that, ladies and gentlemen, is why I am watching you.
...
That came out wrong.
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I'm only awake and you have made my day.
That made me laugh, I'm happy that you enjoy this story.
*reads title for the new chapter*
♪♫ alright already the show goes on all night ♪♫
♪♫ till the morning we dream so long anybody ever wonder ♪♫
♪♫ when they will see the sun up ♪♫
♪♫ just remember when you come up the show goes on ♪♫
3 words: fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/094/c/a/like_a_boss_by_mrfletch1000-d4i37i2.jpg
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Can't say I know the song, but it really sounds like Linkin Park I don't know why.
Still good job none the less.
I wish this chapter were longer, Pinkamenas attack of Twilight came way too fast and I also wish you ''showed'' why Pinkamena hated Twilight instead of just ''telling'' that Pinkamena felt that Twilight and the rest of the mane 6 tried to get rid of her.
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Well it was really only Twilight that tried to get rid of her, but I know what you mean.
I also kinda thought it was obvious for why Pinkamena hated Twilight. I never thought to "show" I thought that would be wasting time.
I guess it is my fault and I am sorry. I hope the next chapter makes up for this really short one.
Sweet!
Went with my idea! And for anyone who's going to ask "What? How's this your idea?" I say "I said in the original ending that I expected Pinkamena to get revenge on Twilight." Now the story can go on for even longer! 
And remember to be a 
STAR!
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He is 100% correct everybody relax lol.
I probably should of asked you could I use it, I'm sorry.
I kinda feel like a thief now...
Nah, it's ok, I wasn't planning on using that anyway. But it's still pretty cool still..... God! I feellike RD when she first met the wonderbolts! 1152540 forgot to reply.
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Thanks man, thanks for being so cool about this.
I feel special because of that wonderbolts part lol.
At first I was like
Now I'm like.
And Pinkamena taking over Pinkie's body reminds me of a Tulpa gone terribly, terribly wrong. I like it, not too much gore yet it still maintains the dark atmosphere throughout the story. Great job, made me think for a second "Oh well, this ended well." and now boom!
PD: Tulpae never do that, it was just a comparison.
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No problem man! and if anyone, (switches to slow, crazy voice) is special, it would be me. I laughed like the Joker gone crazy when I saw a cupcakes video
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Funny you should say that, I'm actually trying to create a Tulpa.
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.
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I laughed like a mad man too.
It appears we have some things in common.
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yes, (finger triangle of doom) yes we do.
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yes, (finger triangle of doom) yes we do.