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and the next chapter is almost finished almost 5000 word already
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Yay for fast writing!
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Silly Jhoira, there is an edit button.
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yup i have had a lot of time to work on this lately
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Hehe, yeah that occurred to me after I did it, hehe.
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so what do you think of the first chapter
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Not done reading it, I'm multitasking, hehe.
Dame that is some good stuff
Crossover tag is needed.
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Does the grammer get better in later chapters? If so you should come back to this one and do some editing, quite a bit of butchered grammer in here as well as excessive use of "and"
This was a epic and sad chapter. I feel sorry for them. I'm happy Jonathan at least had a son for seventeen year before he died he died like a real man protection his son. But pur Noah doesn't even know he was a clone or maybe not maybe he's better off not knowing.