Hey, everyone. I think I will be using a bi-monthly schedule for publishing each chapter from now on, so I'll try my best to stick to it. Also, I've a question for all of you. Out of all the characters introduced thus far, which one would you like to see the more next time? I've a few character developments and side plots to choose from, but I'd like to get your opinions first.
I hope all of you are liking the story so far. If you think there are somethings I could improve on, let me know, I'm open for constructive criticism. Happy reading, everyone!
Hum, the stilted English writing can feel a bit tedious at times, but I think it's off on a good start with your story even it feels a bit rushed with how things are progressing in the story. I would have liked to see to see more interaction between Coffee and the family that brought him in and see how he get around in the the coffee shop of the father owned. I wonder how his duties will work with Fancy Pants and it will mix with his Valet duties as well as his soldier for the noble pony; I wouldn't guess that would make for a good commander if he has trouble taking charge of the situation on his own; I wonder how that will turn out for him?
Still, if you are interested, in getting your own cover art for your story, I am open for commissions, you can take a look at my DA gallery in the link bellow. I always love dressing up ponies in fancy dandy cloths like a butler or 18th century uniforms, I hope you will consider it. Send me a PM my way if you have the chance.
Kaff was sure that unicorns were nothing more, but scams created by the norse, though here was those vikings’ proof that their ‘severed unicorn horns’ were not narwhals’ tusks. Sir Fancy’s one was rather generous in size in proportion to his head. Kaff wondered if it was functional.
Hey, everyone. I think I will be using a bi-monthly schedule for publishing each chapter from now on, so I'll try my best to stick to it. Also, I've a question for all of you. Out of all the characters introduced thus far, which one would you like to see the more next time? I've a few character developments and side plots to choose from, but I'd like to get your opinions first.
I hope all of you are liking the story so far. If you think there are somethings I could improve on, let me know, I'm open for constructive criticism. Happy reading, everyone!
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Men you know i love prussia uniform and their dissipline army that never broke line
Anything Prussian is good in my books.
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The mc enlist army on equestria
Hail to kaiser and rise german empire crush allies
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https://m.I wanna see Kaff begin modernizing the Equestrian military. Guns and drill, woot woot! Fake piano Prussian Glory go!
Underrated
Hum, the stilted English writing can feel a bit tedious at times, but I think it's off on a good start with your story even it feels a bit rushed with how things are progressing in the story. I would have liked to see to see more interaction between Coffee and the family that brought him in and see how he get around in the the coffee shop of the father owned. I wonder how his duties will work with Fancy Pants and it will mix with his Valet duties as well as his soldier for the noble pony; I wouldn't guess that would make for a good commander if he has trouble taking charge of the situation on his own; I wonder how that will turn out for him?
Still, if you are interested, in getting your own cover art for your story, I am open for commissions, you can take a look at my DA gallery in the link bellow. I always love dressing up ponies in fancy dandy cloths like a butler or 18th century uniforms, I hope you will consider it. Send me a PM my way if you have the chance.
https://www.deviantart.com/amalgamzaku
More please
Amazing! This story is absolutely top notch!
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Update please
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*Disciplined.
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