Anytime I read a fic with unicorns that are competent with combat magic, whether it's FoE or not, I look back at my own fic and realize that I made its protagonist just a little overpowered, while simultaneously being inept at actually fighting.
Nice to see Wild recognize that she can learn from her companions. Also, 5x sneak attack damage? That's more broken than ED-E letting you target cloaked enemies :D She'd better learn to sneak and exploit that. She already knows how to shoot, so the next step is teaching her where and how to step.
11673560 Yes! I'm so sorry, I accidentally hit the "publish" button I am currently editing the last little bit of the next chapter and will be officially publishing it very soon! Again, I'm sorry for the confusion!!
Well then what happens when one of them grows up?
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Don't worry, that'll be explained later ;)
Anytime I read a fic with unicorns that are competent with combat magic, whether it's FoE or not, I look back at my own fic and realize that I made its protagonist just a little overpowered, while simultaneously being inept at actually fighting.
Nice to see Wild recognize that she can learn from her companions. Also, 5x sneak attack damage? That's more broken than ED-E letting you target cloaked enemies :D
She'd better learn to sneak and exploit that. She already knows how to shoot, so the next step is teaching her where and how to step.
Definitely a nice story, hope it picks up again.
The web page has this story in the “latest updates” zone, but I don’t see a new chapter…
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Yes! I'm so sorry, I accidentally hit the "publish" button I am currently editing the last little bit of the next chapter and will be officially publishing it very soon! Again, I'm sorry for the confusion!!