Can you maybe specify in the long description which fetishes are played here? So those of us with specific fetishes will know whether we'll be interested in it?
>Regarding fetishes Of course. I’ll edit this chapter and future chapters to include the fetish on display in each one. This one specifically I expect will be “Public”, “Creampie” and “Subplay”
Ok, i have read a LOT of smut. And by far, this is in the top 5 of the best written ones i have ever read. It was short and had little story to it, but the way you did it really worked. I usually dont read anon smut but i loved this one. I hope you do decide to continue this and maybe add story to it as well lol. Great job, keep it up.
9433963 I’m not used to writing smut admittedly, but I am trying to improve the general length and flow of the smut scenes as well. Where the chapters are short, more updates can theoretically be made quickly
9438443 No, I mean why wasn't it added to one of the humanized folders? Based on the picture, and The Equestria Girls tag the story uses humanized characters doesn't it.
This was actually pretty good, my only complain is the length of the scene between them but as you said this is your first time writing clop so no worries
9443800 In the process of finishing up a longer smutfic featuring an anthro Shining Armor and Chrysalis, if that is up your alley. I expect I will add chapters to it, I rather like how the story is going.
Can you maybe specify in the long description which fetishes are played here? So those of us with specific fetishes will know whether we'll be interested in it?
I agree with The Dark Wolf. Just what fetishes will each chapter have, 'cause I'd wanna see Anon getting a footjob from Ember.
>Regarding fetishes
Of course. I’ll edit this chapter and future chapters to include the fetish on display in each one. This one specifically I expect will be “Public”, “Creampie” and “Subplay”
Ok, i have read a LOT of smut. And by far, this is in the top 5 of the best written ones i have ever read. It was short and had little story to it, but the way you did it really worked. I usually dont read anon smut but i loved this one. I hope you do decide to continue this and maybe add story to it as well lol. Great job, keep it up.
I guess my only problem is how short the chapters are
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I’m not used to writing smut admittedly, but I am trying to improve the general length and flow of the smut scenes as well. Where the chapters are short, more updates can theoretically be made quickly
So why was this added to the anthro folder if the Humans Falling in Love with Ponies group?
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Eventual addition will be falling in Love, but I can remove until such time is appropriate.
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No, I mean why wasn't it added to one of the humanized folders? Based on the picture, and The Equestria Girls tag the story uses humanized characters doesn't it.
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Ah, now I understand. I will revise.
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Admittedly, not entirely certain how to remove from a group sub folder.
This was actually pretty good, my only complain is the length of the scene between them but as you said this is your first time writing clop so no worries
Is this a humanised characters fic?
Fucking love it!
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In the process of finishing up a longer smutfic featuring an anthro Shining Armor and Chrysalis, if that is up your alley. I expect I will add chapters to it, I rather like how the story is going.
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Humanized with some pony characteristics, like horns, wings, etc
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Dude, pls comeback
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Pardon?
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sorry, wrong time. i mean the story, pls bring it back
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Ah, gotcha. I’ll see if I can’t write some more of this.
This was awesome start I hope there is more soon (no rush)