So instead of trying to figure out what's wrong with Rarity the right way, Sunset (& friends) deicide to side with the girl that hurt Rarity in the worst way possible & are about to setup a trap to try to remove Venom from her? This can't end well....
"Red alert, people! She's headed for the house at full speed! We need everyone, I repeat, EVERYONE for containment! Remember to bring all your instruments. I'll meet you there as soon as possible. TS, over and out."
Oh, hell, no! You ain't gonna do shiiiiit! You ain't gonna do shiiiiit! You ain't gonna do shit! You ain't gonna do it! You ain't gonna do shit! You ain't gonna do it!
I think I know what the instruments are for. At one point in "Venom", Eddie asked Ziggy (his neighbor) to turn down the music because sound at 4,000-6,000 hertz is lethal for Venom. I think the Equestria Girls will use music to separate Rarity and Venom.
a ok too pretty good story up to this point. you totally missed how Venom would act you should have started out way more aggressive to the point of him being a total ass. even in the later comics venom is still a bit of a ass to every one. no i will not down vote this story it is just to good for that. no i am not being a ass my self this is just the feeling i get from the story.
9469815 vary true but that is how venom is and convincing him to behave is the challenge. but this is your story and you wright it the way you want never wright to please the readers because you never will.
"Sure, whatever. She had a brilliant amaranth hair with light apple green stripes, cyan eyes, light amber skin, and was wearing a black-leather jacket, a dark cap, an orange jacket with a yellow-red sun at the center, and a purple skirt. Does that sound like the person you were talking about?"
That's Sunset! Also
"Red alert, people! She's headed for the house at full speed! We need everyone, I repeat, EVERYONE for containment! Remember to bring all your instruments. I'll meet you there as soon as possible. TS, over and out."
So instead of trying to figure out what's wrong with Rarity the right way, Sunset (& friends) deicide to side with the girl that hurt Rarity in the worst way possible & are about to setup a trap to try to remove Venom from her? This can't end well....
So now Rarity's friends are backstabbing her.
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Don't worry.
Everything will be made more clear in the next chapter.
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No, not exactly.
Wait for the next chapter and you'll find out what's really happening.
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ok
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Let's hope so...
Things are getting more intense. I'm still excited, and I encourage you to keep writing.
Oh, hell, no! You ain't gonna do shiiiiit! You ain't gonna do shiiiiit! You ain't gonna do shit! You ain't gonna do it! You ain't gonna do shit! You ain't gonna do it!
I think I know what the instruments are for. At one point in "Venom", Eddie asked Ziggy (his neighbor) to turn down the music because sound at 4,000-6,000 hertz is lethal for Venom. I think the Equestria Girls will use music to separate Rarity and Venom.
Just a theory.
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Just be prepared to have your mind blown.
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I'm ready. :)
a ok too pretty good story up to this point.
you totally missed how Venom would act you should have started out way more aggressive to the point of him being a total ass.
even in the later comics venom is still a bit of a ass to every one.
no i will not down vote this story it is just to good for that.
no i am not being a ass my self this is just the feeling i get from the story.
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If the Symbiote was a complete ass to everyone around Rarity from the start, then she would not want to work with him at all.
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vary true but that is how venom is and convincing him to behave is the challenge.
but this is your story and you wright it the way you want never wright to please the readers because you never will.
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Thanks for the awesome advice. 👍
That's Sunset! Also
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=BGqx4algAMw