A reasonable start. Do you know how long this is going to be?

Why does this feel like this is a story in a series

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probably this line

With a shrug he reached into his pocket and pulled out his badge. He initially felt it was ridiculous that they’d have a title of Royal Foalsitter. That was before he learned about the lust god and all the foals born after its defeat. He showed her the badge. It was uninteresting, mostly so foals, fillies, and colts wouldn’t mess with it.

I mean there has to be a prequel for that right?

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Exactly I mean it even said that he became a royal babysitter why how when

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The why is thanks to said lust god, and the when is after he fouls were born.

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Then why is he retired if there a need for royalty and living with the 2 sisters ( who my or mynot have foals)
I would deliver twilight at least in the same town Why would you need to retire instead of just transferring

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like I said there will either be backstory in future chapters or a prequel. On a side note, he said he was watching the kids of random nobles so I guess the main kids no longer need a sitter or someone else is doing it now.

Is it just me or does rarity come off as a capital B in this story?

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She's just there to set the scene and go away. Also, pre-season one, so definitely focused on certain things above others.

The title does seem deceptive up till now