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How much going on?
F1 or Hurricane?
Or nuclear bomb?

Things are starting to get interesting.

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Well yes.

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If you want to get a huge kill count chapter ten will give you it, just wait for it.

A mercenary group? This story is really starting to get interesting.

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It will only be the four of them to start but it will grow.

*just reads Chapter 7*
Yes...So far the pacing has...calmed down a bit, in my opinion you should have them walking for some time, and then, BANDITS!
The part where Twilight's in a coma and seeing her friends...is interesting to say the least.
Other then that, so far the story's been,
BRILLANT idea,
Medium Execution (meaning it isn't bad, but it could be better)

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2 hours did pass so they had been moving for a while plus wagons are slow and bulky so they haven't gone very far.

Please say that Spike is going to join Twilight's team. Because I don't want Twilight to hate him 😞

He just a baby dragon, and I feel that the anothers ponies force him into leaving Twilight all alone.

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Spike hasn't turned up but he will be mentioned in a future chapter.

Ok. Happy holidays.

Well you are doing a good job on this story, keep up the work!

keep it up i relly want to finish this book.

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Of course you would want spike

Then he tried to pull the blade out only for it to refuse to move, he then looked up to see her horn glowing and the blade was glowing the same colour. He looked up to her scowling face as she swung her sword lopping his head clean off “Checkmate Bastard!”

Isn't it "Checkmate dumbass"

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He is Spike2000