I enjoyed the first chapter by premise alone, but taking it a bit slower with an individual mare does make the corruption all the sweeter. A lovely chapter, and I'll stay hungry for more~
Yeees, good, more chapters and plot in this story ! Starting with his mom is solid, now we need to explore so much more, classmates, teachers, sport mares, lesbians... What a lucky colt.
I love the story. I enjoyed the first chapter a lot and this chapter is just as good for different reasons. Now I love the idea of corrupting the girls individually but, I was wondering are you ever going to have flashback chapters to the 2 weeks of just total mind control that Button had. Or make a side story of what he did during that time because that could be interesting to read. Anyway love the chapter and can't wait for more.
Honestly, I kind of felt like this should have been the first chapter while the previous is more like a prologue. The previous chapter felt like jumping from the opening cutscene to the closing one. This is more of a proper start for what I said I was wanting before. Planning and seducing, growing his power incrementally. Then again, I suppose I also like the premise of him playing in a modded version of the game he's already beaten.
This whole day just felt off. Button wasn't getting the usual thrill from taking advantage of a horde of mares and fillies. But nothing had gone wrong or was out of place. In fact, everything was going along perfectly. Maybe it was just a phase.
Hmmmm . . . Could it be because mind controlling everyone and using them for sex is an inherently empty endeavor that sidesteps the rich complexities of forging and maintaining healthy relationships? No!. Let’s go the “One Punch Man” route and say he’s bored cause he’s overpowered. That totally makes sense. #sarcasm
Seriously though, are we just gonna ignore the ethical implications of this entire premise?
9336360 don't like it don't read it simple as that.... i for one like this fic even if i don't really like incest i let people have it because let's be real everyone has their own hidden fetishes some have watersports others have scat,feet,boobs,ass etc it's a good fic.
9346601 I will read it, of course. It just annoyed me that (minus the prologue) it started with the classic Button Mash ship: Buttoncest. Hell, Buttoncest is even more popular nowadays than SweetieMash. I get that Button's mom seems hot, but if she wasn't his mother I would have no problem with it. Siblingcest, I can take, but MotherXSon? No, just no.
That's tame?
I enjoyed the first chapter by premise alone, but taking it a bit slower with an individual mare does make the corruption all the sweeter.
A lovely chapter, and I'll stay hungry for more~
Level 1 : Incest
Why must it always start with incest?
Also, how did this story become popular in the first place?
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... Because it's good?
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Well, people like clop. This is creative clop. It's an interesting concept.
Yeees, good, more chapters and plot in this story ! Starting with his mom is solid, now we need to explore so much more, classmates, teachers, sport mares, lesbians... What a lucky colt.
I love the story. I enjoyed the first chapter a lot and this chapter is just as good for different reasons. Now I love the idea of corrupting the girls individually but, I was wondering are you ever going to have flashback chapters to the 2 weeks of just total mind control that Button had. Or make a side story of what he did during that time because that could be interesting to read.
Anyway love the chapter and can't wait for more.
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Fetishes and Morbid Curiosity
I felt this was appropriate.
Epic
The next or at least one of the next chapters will probably be with Sweetie Belle. That's just obvious like the Incest chapter.
Good start, keep it up.
Fantastic work, please continue.
Excellent chapter.
Honestly, I kind of felt like this should have been the first chapter while the previous is more like a prologue. The previous chapter felt like jumping from the opening cutscene to the closing one. This is more of a proper start for what I said I was wanting before. Planning and seducing, growing his power incrementally. Then again, I suppose I also like the premise of him playing in a modded version of the game he's already beaten.
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Cause we're all a bunch of filthy perverts. That's how.
Hmmmm . . . Could it be because mind controlling everyone and using them for sex is an inherently empty endeavor that sidesteps the rich complexities of forging and maintaining healthy relationships? No!. Let’s go the “One Punch Man” route and say he’s bored cause he’s overpowered. That totally makes sense. #sarcasm
Seriously though, are we just gonna ignore the ethical implications of this entire premise?
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don't like it don't read it simple as that.... i for one like this fic even if i don't really like incest i let people have it because let's be real everyone has their own hidden fetishes some have watersports others have scat,feet,boobs,ass etc it's a good fic.
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I will read it, of course. It just annoyed me that (minus the prologue) it started with the classic Button Mash ship: Buttoncest. Hell, Buttoncest is even more popular nowadays than SweetieMash. I get that Button's mom seems hot, but if she wasn't his mother I would have no problem with it. Siblingcest, I can take, but MotherXSon? No, just no.
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So you don't like Parent/Child but you are okay with Siblingcest? ..... doesn't make any sense...
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Parent/Child is both incest and pedophilia. There can be only one.
pls more
mmmm creampies (maybe a few people will be fertile)
Really hope this isn't dead...