Sometimes life doesn't work out how you want. Sometimes there's joy, sometimes there's suffering, often times life can be as cruel as it is kind, but you have to take the bad with the good. That's life, and Twilight Sparkle has no choice but to live.
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Ah, it seems getting away from that dead world has done wonders for her sanity. Good to know.
Finally! Demon-Twi shows up at last!
Well, good to see the other Twilight. Her new form is interesting. The frost breath makes me think of Windigos? They're...kinda ethereal I guess, but it still leaves a lot of questions.
Hmm.... Welp, time to wait for the next update.
Wait, what I get here is that the Twilight that finally appeared in this chapter isn't necessarily the same thing as the Avatar of Vengeance or, at least that the Avatar has a mind of its own that this Twilight can't control. Perhaps the time travel separated them in some way... I'm not really sure about this though.
Anyway, I'm extremely happy that we finally get her point of view again!
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I'm honestly kind of confused by what you mean here. Why wouldn't it be the same character? It's still the same Twilight, still the same Avatar, just a different form. She's acting somewhat differently, but that's based entirely on the fact that she's in a different place going through a different situation and thus, has reacted differently.
If it's because she isn't attacking everything in sight, the reasons for that were because a) she had a mission to complete as soon as possible before, and now doesn't, and b) the hunger, which, as you've read, isn't an issue anymore. Unless you meant this is what you though before she showed up, in which case, yeah, this is the same Avatar you've come to know and love(?).
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OK then, I was just a bit confused because in the earlier chapters the other characters hear screams and see flashes of light in the forest. Thus, the fact that in this chapter Twilight just wakes up in some ice thing and goes to their encounter made me think that these were the signs of some other entity's acts.
So how did they hear and see clear signs of the Avatar's presence if Twilight just woke up? I mean, that will probably be explained in the following chapters (who knows, maybe I just don't remember the first chapters correctly and just made this thing up) but, this confusion caused me to misunderstand the whole thing and to write my other comment.
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Oh, I see, you're confused about the timing. Well if that's the case, there's two things you should know, the scream and light weren't Twilight waking up, it was a reaction to entering a new timeline, and not everyone entered the timeline at the same time (or rather, some entered the timeline earlier than others) for reasons I'll get to later.
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Only a maximum of three pepole can travel trugh the time strem at a time kind of deal then?
Yay, Chrono Trigger references.
Since my last poem's content was wrong (and also just because I was bored), I decided to try writing another one about the fight between Celestia/Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon that took place in this universe. I hope the poem isn't wrong this time!
Upon a night, the darkened doom descended from the skies
The Queen of light stood up to gloom, our leader strong and wise
The Lunar demon spread its wings
Sharp teeth within its jaws
Its endless rage surpassed all things
It ravaged all its foes
Our leader, brave, did not concede
But tried to reason with the beast
The thing, however did no heed
Its anger in no way decreased
The innocents it went to slay
With ruthless malice hunting prey
This scene was too much to endure
Rage replaced mercy, hot and pure
Taking the Sun's almighty blaze
This monster willing to erase
The Solar Queen attacked her rival
All power in a single blast
The horrid nightmare could not last
All odds were stacked against survival
It gave our leader one last sneer
But not of anger nor of spite
Its eyes were filled with endless fear
The creature frightened by this might
And so, the darkness has been slain
Our land could now return to light
But still, we can't forget the pain
We all lost something on this night...
That is some good content! So fulfilling and invigorating as we get our last time traveling actor into the scene. With them all in place this begs the question of what next? Will our timid quartet accept this mysterious mares favor? Will something happen to our Twilight in another place? Will Spike ever have the mercy to remember something in his life? So many questions and all I can do is wait. Good story, and I can’t wait to see what’s next!
I am very happy to see B-Twi become more sane and benevolent. She deserves it.