Screwy had a simple life. No other dog in Ponyville was as big and strong as her, and that was how she liked it. Or so she thought. Then she met a stallion that changed everything.
"We don't know how it's going to affect her, and we won't know the extent of it for at least a year. She seems cognizant of her situation now, but there was a lot of damage. She seems to be speaking a little less than normal, and doesn't engage ponies in dialogue unless directly spoken to. Isn't that right, Screwed Tight?"
My name pulled my attention to the stallion—a doctor. I blinked a few times, my brain sorting through the mass of information for what he'd been talking about to warrant a question, but had nothing. "S-Sorry, what was that?"
"I was just explaining to your friend what has happened, Screwed Tight." The doctor waved a hoof toward the other occupant of my room, a young stallion I could almost remember.
Glancing from the doctor to my "friend", I looked at him up and down—he was cute, or he would be if he didn't look sad. "Hi!" I said.
Poor Screwy......at least she has Sunburst taking care of her.
9395978 I'll point out something here: her mental age isn't affected, just her world-perception. I think I emphasized Sunburst waiting for her to make the moves and going at her pace.
9397628 Indeed. There's a bit of a tragic story happening in the background of this, but I'm pretty sure the foreground is an effective foil to any actual sadness.
To show you the power of FlexTape, I hit this pony over the head!
We don't know how it's going to affect her, and we won't know the extent of it for at least a year. She seems cognizant of her situation now, but there was a lot of damage.
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9394299 Romance and sex, specifically in that order.
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9394373 It's not made much of at all, I just used it as extra reinforcement that she really doesn't think like a pony.
9394740 Uh, thanks!
9394745 It's 10am and I haven't had a beer yet. Ya gonna have to spell it out for me.
Gosh, that was lovely to have happen first thing in the morning. Not a fan of racism, so you can have a timeout and deal with it yourself.
Great chapter! Pupper pone is so kind
9395298 She just wants to have a good bark.
This is such an original fanfic, love it <3 I'm a fan of its quirkiness XD
9395374 Thanks!
Oh, my gosh.
This is endearing!
Huh, not sure how I feel about sexy times with the mentally handicapped but every other part of the story has my interest.
Poor Screwy......at least she has Sunburst taking care of her.
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9395978 I'll point out something here: her mental age isn't affected, just her world-perception. I think I emphasized Sunburst waiting for her to make the moves and going at her pace.
9397628 Indeed. There's a bit of a tragic story happening in the background of this, but I'm pretty sure the foreground is an effective foil to any actual sadness.
To show you the power of FlexTape, I hit this pony over the head!