Death was part of life; Celestia was well aware of this. But she refused to accept the death of her closest friend, her best advisor... her beloved. And she would do anything to get him back.
In my 6+ years of scrolling around for good works I've found a good number of favorites and even a number that I hate because of lost potential.
I've seen a lack of a few things. Good Daring Do Good Human and Spitfire/ Fleet foot Any amount more than one or two Human and Eris (R63 Discord) Stuff with such potential as this. If done right I feel it could rival Exchange with all its potential. And that story is a mammoth amongst all favorites. Please continue. I also don't comment often if at all.
9404623 I thank you so much for taking the time to comment. I really do appreciate feedback. Exchange is one of my absolute favourites, and I have to agree with you. I’ll try my best to live up to such high standards, and I’ll appreciate all the feedback I can get
It's only the first chapter and already the suspense is killing me.
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That’s the point ;) glad you enjoyed!
It's got that good drama
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Thanks! I'm really testing the waters here to see what works well, so feedback is great to hear. Thanks for taking the time to read it!
https://youtu.be/SDea7laHD4E
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I actually love that song lol
MOOOOOOOOOORRE
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As you wish;)
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JUST DO IT
DON'T LET YOUR DREAMS BE DREAMS
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It was never stated that he was dead, no.
In case you didn’t see my note on the other story is Luna dead or did she get banished again and how?
So much mysteries, so much suspense... could it be... that Cel's Beloved is still alive??
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Nah.
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Can we get an F in the chat?
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F
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Wow, you've got something here.
In my 6+ years of scrolling around for good works I've found a good number of favorites and even a number that I hate because of lost potential.
I've seen a lack of a few things.
Good Daring Do
Good Human and Spitfire/ Fleet foot
Any amount more than one or two Human and Eris (R63 Discord)
Stuff with such potential as this. If done right I feel it could rival Exchange with all its potential. And that story is a mammoth amongst all favorites.
Please continue. I also don't comment often if at all.
9404623
I thank you so much for taking the time to comment. I really do appreciate feedback. Exchange is one of my absolute favourites, and I have to agree with you. I’ll try my best to live up to such high standards, and I’ll appreciate all the feedback I can get