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Okay, no, there is a serious problem with the story right now.
You can't have Spike go into a murderous rampage, attacking his own crew mindlessly, and then have things go on like that never happened. That's not how things work. You have everyone act like the only problem is Spike not thinking things through (which is a fair accusation) but ignore the whole 'tried to kill his crew' thing.
The way it's now, I'm starting to think the only reason it's in there is to show off how super-strong and powerful and awesome Spike is, instead of it being a horrible danger to everyone around him, which is how any sane person would think. Don't use it just to shill Spike, it's a horrible thing that happened and if nobody cares, then why is it in there in the first place?
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You do realize that in MLP, problems like these are quickly resolved
Good chapter.
Since they're now stranded, they need to find a way to repair the mast and get out of Flotsam before any Cutthroats or the HMS Pinafore learn of his whereabouts. If either group finds them, their toast and now Rainbow Dash is beginning to question her loyalty to the Pinafore and to the mission to bring Spike home. She knows that Spike and his crew wouldn't take to kindly to an agent of the Pinafore aboard the ship.
If Rainbow were to reveal her identity to Spike and his crew, he would probably leave her when they fix the mast. But if she states that her loyalty is to Spike since the many adventures, triumphs, failures and disagreements since joining the crew - Would he and his crew accept her as Rainbow Dash instead of Mystic Jewel?
Well, she has a few chapters to make up her mind: It's Spike or the HMS Pinafore. I hope that the choice she makes would be the right choice from her heart. She even kissed him after their game of strip poker during his recovery.
Until next time, Caecae97.