9209079 I'm looking into getting An editor, and there being pumped out like crazy cause I've been working on this for a while, just doing some reworking and adding some stuff before I post each chapter
I'm at work till 10 so id say next chapter at 12 or 1ish
9211059 I disagree, because at least AJ can keep a secret that needs to be kept. Plus if her partner (be it a he/she) doesn't want to talk about something or talk yet, she will more than likely respect their answer and leave them be until they're ready. Not to mention as we've seen AJ backup Spike and Gabby, she shows more loyalty than Rainbow, adding to the list of reasons why she should be be both the element of Honesty AND Loyalty. There are just not alot of times where RD is loyal, and when she is, it's when something dire or dangerous that involves those she cares about happens to show it, where as AJ is loyal through and through. Also, just adding this in here, Cadence shows the reason why I personally don't like royalty, flaunting her title around, deeming it ok to pry into something that could be or is private and romantic, especially considering if she was in Spike/Gabby's shoe's she'd definitely want it to be private. I don't hate her, but she showcases exactly how hypocritical the ponies and princesses are. Still I love the story and will continue reading
Good ol' AJ to the rescue.
This is great. Needs a spell check but is a great story so far. And these chapters are being pumped out like crazy!
9209079
I'm looking into getting An editor, and there being pumped out like crazy cause I've been working on this for a while, just doing some reworking and adding some stuff before I post each chapter
I'm at work till 10 so id say next chapter at 12 or 1ish
9209180
I can be your editor if you want.
9209437
I would love that, I can send you a google doc link at 10, because right now I'm typing at work and hoping my boss dosent notice
Hence the reason why Applejack can't get a boyfriend/girlfriend.
podemos confiar en applejack jeje
We can trust applejack hehe
9211059
I disagree, because at least AJ can keep a secret that needs to be kept. Plus if her partner (be it a he/she) doesn't want to talk about something or talk yet, she will more than likely respect their answer and leave them be until they're ready. Not to mention as we've seen AJ backup Spike and Gabby, she shows more loyalty than Rainbow, adding to the list of reasons why she should be be both the element of Honesty AND Loyalty. There are just not alot of times where RD is loyal, and when she is, it's when something dire or dangerous that involves those she cares about happens to show it, where as AJ is loyal through and through. Also, just adding this in here, Cadence shows the reason why I personally don't like royalty, flaunting her title around, deeming it ok to pry into something that could be or is private and romantic, especially considering if she was in Spike/Gabby's shoe's she'd definitely want it to be private. I don't hate her, but she showcases exactly how hypocritical the ponies and princesses are.
Still I love the story and will continue reading
9551455
Hope you enjoy it, and I agree that AJ should be Honesty and Loyalty, and I liked your view on Cadance,